Words can bite...
by Carin Spirit
Friday, October 17, 2008
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... some words send me to my safe place. |
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Some words make my heart
so full and content.
Other words, with a bite
send me to a shelter.
The face of indifference
masks my fear and pain.
I am not running from
the love that is really there.
I just don't understand the
sting of accusation,
as though a mistake
was an intentional deed.
How can I avoid repeating
this misidentified error,
if you don't tell me with Love.
I don't know how to respond
to stop it, don't do that, when
I am unsure of the right way.
Words like 'I don't care' carry
the sharpest twinge.
If you love me, how can you
not care how I feel.
Please ask me my intent......
© 2008 Carin' Spirit
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/9/2008 |
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A deeply felt plea, and a very wise message
in this excellent poem! We are not always
fair in our relationships,and what we say
Thanks for sharing!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/3/2008 |
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| an answer to your emotional plea is more than well deserved, for your sentiments are valid and honest ... |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
11/3/2008 |
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| Excellent thoughts,well done! Holly |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
10/27/2008 |
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Carin' Spirit,
This is one solid write . . . well done!!
Best wishes,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/17/2008 |
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| You have expressed yourself so well in this. "Please ask me my intent......"...I love these last lines. |
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