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Words can bite...
by Carin Spirit
Friday, October 17, 2008
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... some words send me to my safe place.

Some words make my heart
so full and content.

Other words, with a bite
send me to a shelter.
The face of indifference
masks my fear and pain.

I am not running from
the love that is really there.
I just don't understand the
sting of accusation,
as though a mistake
was an intentional deed.

How can I avoid repeating
this misidentified error,
if you don't tell me with Love.

I don't know how to respond
to stop it, don't do that, when
I am unsure of  the right way.
Words like 'I don't care' carry
the sharpest twinge.

If you love me, how can you
not care how I feel.

Please ask me my intent......

 

  © 2008 Carin' Spirit

 

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Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/9/2008
A deeply felt plea, and a very wise message
in this excellent poem! We are not always
fair in our relationships,and what we say
Thanks for sharing!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by jude forese 11/3/2008
an answer to your emotional plea is more than well deserved, for your sentiments are valid and honest ...
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 11/3/2008
Excellent thoughts,well done! Holly
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/27/2008
Carin' Spirit,

This is one solid write . . . well done!!


Best wishes,

Lance
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/17/2008
You have expressed yourself so well in this. "Please ask me my intent......"...I love these last lines.
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