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Words can bite...
by Carin Spirit
Friday, October 17, 2008
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... some words send me to my safe place.

Some words make my heart
so full and content.

Other words, with a bite
send me to a shelter.
The face of indifference
masks my fear and pain.

I am not running from
the love that is really there.
I just don't understand the
sting of accusation,
as though a mistake
was an intentional deed.

How can I avoid repeating
this misidentified error,
if you don't tell me with Love.

I don't know how to respond
to stop it, don't do that, when
I am unsure of  the right way.
Words like 'I don't care' carry
the sharpest twinge.

If you love me, how can you
not care how I feel.

Please ask me my intent......


  © 2008 Carin' Spirit


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Reviewed by E T Waldron
A deeply felt plea, and a very wise message
in this excellent poem! We are not always
fair in our relationships,and what we say
Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by jude forese
an answer to your emotional plea is more than well deserved, for your sentiments are valid and honest ...
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Excellent thoughts,well done! Holly
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Carin' Spirit,

This is one solid write . . . well done!!

Best wishes,

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
You have expressed yourself so well in this. "Please ask me my intent......"...I love these last lines.
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