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First I'm Gonna Cry
by Southern Comfort

Saturday, October 25, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Tears are liquid pain, they express deep hurt and are needed in order to heal. This is for Dreamy Gal and me.

I watch the sunset paint the sky,
As another chapter ends with another painful good-bye.
It's time to move on again, this fact makes me sigh,
But before I try to leave, I'm gonna have a good cry.
People I try to love and trust are always letting me down,
They suddenly disappear and are just not around.
I ponder this fact and ask WHY?
Then I just have me a good ole cry.
I always end up uninvited, with my nose pressed against the windowpane,
The one left alone standing, outside in the shadowy rain.
Will I reach out again? Why even bother to try,
I will shake off my pain, after I have a good cry.

MUSIC: AS TEARS GO BY


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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 11/2/2008
Deep emotions have to be let out. A very nicely written poem

hugs
Kathy Lynn
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 10/30/2008
There are times when a good cry is needed...but then, we need to move on. Well expressed.
Reviewed by Stuart McCallum 10/26/2008
SC,

A good cry often clears the mind allowing beautiful thoughts to rise above sadness and despair. Your admirable strength and talent will clear your path.

Stay strong, Stuart (Australia)
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/25/2008
SC,
Yes, you will try again because it's in your unconquerable nature to try...after the cathartic cry.
John
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 10/25/2008
SC I have always said that tears are shed to wash away the pain we feel inside and out. As Felix says we can never just give up Sc. Do you know how many here on AD just loves you to death. We will always be here with open arms and hugs, looking forward to reading your words you so willingly share with us.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/25/2008
S.C.,

It does well to have a good cry every now and then. In life, people enter and leave. Some with no explaination and others returning as the prodigal. Though we may not like it we must roll with the punches. Peace, Love and Friendship Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/25/2008
Wonderfully written, Comfort. You got me, yes me, all misty here...
but you know, Sugah, some how it just don't sound like you. -gene.
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines 10/25/2008
Great title, perfect song, and a poem which cries real tears. Beautiful work, Sweetie. Have you ever noted that the very best novels have many very short chapters? Tis true. But they all lead to that final chapter where all dreams are fulfilled. Count on it :-)

Ted
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 10/25/2008
Sometimes we find it on our way and we need to climb a peak with pain and efforts, and reaching the top discover infront of us another one much bigger and we have the thought of giving up, but then we realize that doing that we will never reach our destination, and with bleeding feet and hands we continue because we are the ones that never surrender.
We will lose a few battles but never the war.

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May 10/25/2008
Those tears can turn into joy too my friend. When you find the one you want to stay for eternity. You will with that big heart of yours. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/25/2008
Tears purge the soul of pain and nourish the heart with hope...and as long as you keep hope you will always come out on top. No one can guarentee you a love that will be perfect or last forever but...
if we don't try will we ever find it and without finding it, is live worth living?

Fee
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/25/2008
Painful as it has been you have risen above it.
Reviewed by Silent Dream 10/25/2008
I love you ((((hugs))))
~yourDreamyGal
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 10/25/2008
This is painful, SC!...and for some reason, this one speaks to me too this morning. Guess we are just two sad souls.

But we shall rise again!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by 000 000 10/25/2008
Go ahead and cry--eventually you run out of tears.
Sunshine and love to you dear Southern Comfort.
CarolHawks
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