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Reviewing & Writing
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Monday, November 03, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The life of an AD poet. |
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As I review and write
I see day and night
and then some excite
William Bonilla's humorous
blog did it just right
Even I dwindle between
day and night
wrong and right
and at times I also try
to excite
I get stuck in pain quite a bit
and sometimes can't quit
bigotry and hate
poetic bullchit also relate
Then there's love verse
some I write good
others might be worse
but I always serve my curse
In between
writng and reviewing
at times I get a little lost
in what I'm doing
Just what is my aim
and who's the blame
In the end it's up to
me to tame
or continue on lame
maybe end up in shame
as I play this poetic game
Either way
I'm a poet just the same
OnepoetGem
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
11/5/2008 |
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| Well written, love ya! Holly |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/4/2008 |
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| very nice! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
11/4/2008 |
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Just Keep On Writing--Those With Enough Intelligence Will Either Comment Or Pass On By... Ignorance My Friend Is Part Of Bigotry As Hate...
Most Here Just Somehow Can't Get Past 3rd Grade Mentality!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
11/4/2008 |
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In short, this is damn good writing, smooth like well aged bourbon.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
11/4/2008 |
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Grady, it's a gentle curse, for better or worse, to have to write verse, wordy or terse, comic and perverse, for readers diverse, earning no coin for our purse, 'til we ride in a hearse, but it's sooooooooo much fun :-)
Write on, Poet!!! |
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