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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
1/12/2009 |
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You always have such great insights to share...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
1/4/2009 |
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Oooooh yes! You are absolutely right. I especially like the bit about paranoia keeping the victim bound. I have seen a great deal of that.
Thank you for this poem.
Blessings J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
1/4/2009 |
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I enjoy reading this thoughtful and truthful poem.Take good care of yourself
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
1/3/2009 |
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| Linda, what a truthful writing this is...it gave me chills. It's great when we know someone GREATER is in control and our sorrows become like dots on a page. I loved this! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/3/2009 |
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Linda,
What can I say? Undone by the truths in these lines - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/3/2009 |
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Great message in this, Linda, and I love the format! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
1/3/2009 |
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| Until we realize that we're not in control life will be as you write. This is a brilliant poem and I applaud you Linda. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
1/3/2009 |
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How true. If we are broken we need to be fixed, but cannot do it alone. And I agree with Connie, I love the appearance.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
1/3/2009 |
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This is first of all, beautiful in appearance. It is a thought-provoking poem, hits deep in the inner man (woman) and resonates with timeless truth. Terrific!
Connie |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
1/3/2009 |
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This runaway train of brokenness I have seen in my self, and others, some of which is curable to the degree that you recognize and can treat it. The trouble is that sometimes things happen that are so traumatic that we experience the effects to our programming of the viral infection of the soul, but are unaware of the root cause of the problem, because we cannot see the forest for the trees. Therefore our wrong pattern of action continues, based on false or outdated input, long after the original danger has passed.
You touch on this very well, Linda.I admire your poetic courage to tackle this subject so adroitly in this elegant manner for all the world to share. Keep sowing the good seed. The crop will come in one HARVEST DAY for you, too
Rockie Coppolella
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
1/3/2009 |
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Linda ~ I love this one, it provokes much thought and brings such wisdom. "To stop the flow of runaway brokenness." Today is the day! Although there has been many days for this, it never hurts to check on the repair.
Warmth and Love to you. Be Well! Carin
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