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Captured In The Dark
by MaryGrace Patterson
Wednesday, March 25, 2009
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A poem about my frst real love of many years ago. (A repost)

We met in the summer time
on a bright sunny day
He took my hand and held it,
as afternoons light faded away

He asked me to meet him
beneath the moon lit sky
Should I go I wondered,could
he care for someone such as I

We met in the woodland park
when the stars were shining bright
The golden moon was casting shadows
in the warm sultry night

He took me in his arms,
kissing me passionately
Sweet words were whispered
about how much he desired me

My feeling were running rampart,
our emotions were so strong
I thought,desire like this,
canot be so wrong

Gently he held me,
while loving me tenderly
He was my first real love,
I thought our romance would always be

Sometimes love doesn't last forever,
feelings do not stay the same
Eventually we parted,
yet his memory remains

Some nights he still comes to me,
as I dream of that moonlit park,
for its where he took my love,
when I was, Captured In The Dark

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Reviewed by JMS Bell
EXCELLENT...AN ABSOLUTE GEM! YOUR PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME FLOW SO WELL TOGETHER. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Thank you for sharing such a sweet memory.
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
MaryGrace,

Romance just doesn't always stay around. And in first loves, rarely does, but still the memories are sweet. Beautifull written.

Mary
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Beautifully written romantic tale MG. Very well done. God bless.
Reviewed by jude forese
well written romance ...
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
so lovely to have this sweet memory
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
I believe a first love is never really forgotten. Thank you for sharing MaryGrace.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
The feeling for our first love is always so pure and beautiful!! I enjoyed this poem!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
wow...I think my first love was in 4th grade,,he took me to the malt shop and we sat in different booths,,,lol. Nice Poem!
Reviewed by 000 000
tender and romantic...our first loves live with us always!
Some, like myself, get to keep the first loves, and stay with them forever!
Reviewed by Brenda Dobson
MaryGrace, I can certainly identify with your experience. We all have our one true love in life.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
MaryGrace,
I don't think we ever forget those first times, the halting steps into romance and love, thank you for this, you bring it all back wonderfully.
John
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
This is a warm, sweet love story, MaryGrace. Nicely done.
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