Captured In The Dark
by Mary Grace Patterson
Wednesday, March 25, 2009
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A poem about my frst real love of many years ago. (A repost)
We met in the summer time
on a bright sunny day
He took my hand and held it,
as afternoons light faded away
He asked me to meet him
beneath the moon lit sky
Should I go I wondered,could
he care for someone such as I
We met in the woodland park
when the stars were shining bright
The golden moon was casting shadows
in the warm sultry night
He took me in his arms,
kissing me passionately
Sweet words were whispered
about how much he desired me
My feeling were running rampart,
our emotions were so strong
I thought,desire like this,
canot be so wrong
Gently he held me,
while loving me tenderly
He was my first real love,
I thought our romance would always be
Sometimes love doesn't last forever,
feelings do not stay the same
Eventually we parted,
yet his memory remains
Some nights he still comes to me,
as I dream of that moonlit park,
for its where he took my love,
when I was, Captured In The Dark
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|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|EXCELLENT...AN ABSOLUTE GEM! YOUR PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME FLOW SO WELL TOGETHER. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Thank you for sharing such a sweet memory.|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Romance just doesn't always stay around. And in first loves, rarely does, but still the memories are sweet. Beautifull written.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautifully written romantic tale MG. Very well done. God bless.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well written romance ...|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|so lovely to have this sweet memory|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I believe a first love is never really forgotten. Thank you for sharing MaryGrace.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|The feeling for our first love is always so pure and beautiful!! I enjoyed this poem!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|wow...I think my first love was in 4th grade,,he took me to the malt shop and we sat in different booths,,,lol. Nice Poem!|
|Reviewed by 000 000
|tender and romantic...our first loves live with us always!
Some, like myself, get to keep the first loves, and stay with them forever!
|Reviewed by Brenda Dobson
|MaryGrace, I can certainly identify with your experience. We all have our one true love in life.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
I don't think we ever forget those first times, the halting steps into romance and love, thank you for this, you bring it all back wonderfully.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|This is a warm, sweet love story, MaryGrace. Nicely done.|