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At the Parade - 2 Ku
by Lori L Moore

Sunday, July 05, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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4th of July Parade - A Sad Reality

honor guard

inattentive spectators-

no honor given

 

clowns

pass by-

wild applause

 

 

-- Or the combo...

 

honor guard

look, the clowns-

no honor given

 


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Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 7/27/2009
Powerfully delivered!! Well done! xox
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 7/7/2009
This rings true on both sides of the Atlantic. And, translating this into the MJ Memorial Service today, it has been most commented on by our British media that the mood of attendees is more akin to yet another feel-good show rather than that of the funeral of a friend. We are funny people. Clowns, yes. xx
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 7/6/2009
We watched the 4th of July parade and the fireworks from my balcony, and I was very attentive about everything. The honor guard, the clowns, the politicians in their vehicles, the bands playing their selections, and here we had children on bicycles in various costumes. For a small town we had a good parade that lasted 2 hours. The floats were nice too.

It is a very sad reality though that some people just go to these events to get together with old chums, or get drunk. I have seen both. Thank you for sharing some of the other things we have forgotten too. And thank you for your comments on my poems.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 7/6/2009
Too true and sad a statement. Well written, but if you look closely, you will find many who do show respect and honor those who are truly deserving. But most need to wake up to what is truly important! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by DELETE ACCOUNT 7/6/2009
sad
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/6/2009
So very sad.
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 7/6/2009
Great haikus that expresses the sad reality,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/5/2009
I think there was a parade nearby, as I only hear the sirens from the firetrucks and such...heck if I am going to go driving in the traffic heading back from the shore...ed
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/5/2009
Say It: Peter I Couldn't Have Said It Better...

TRASK
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 7/5/2009
Yes, and let's beat the Michael Jackson dead horse some more while Congress continues to sell us down the river passing tyrannical climate bills, bailouts, covert ops destabilizing Iran, expansion of the war into Pakistan, federalization of all water, federalization of all food, etc. God Lori it never ends. Great poem. If the American people want to see clowns, just turn on C-Span!!
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 7/5/2009
A SAD RELIZATION OF THE THINGS THAT PEOPLE HAVE COME TO VALUE WHILE IGNORING THOSE WHO MADE THE OBSERVANCE OF THE PARADE ON FREE SHORES POSSIBLE. IRONIC. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/5/2009
Spot on perfection, Lori, spot on. Shame, how apathetic as a Nation we've become - this daughter, sister, niece, cousin of Veterans, as well as a USAF Veteran, herself, will always honor those who serve(d). Bank on that! Thank you for remembering with such powerful lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/5/2009
Your well-chosen words express a great deal, Lori. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/5/2009
Although both ku's are sharp I think I prefer the second but maybe it is because the first open the door to the second.

Fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/5/2009
Sad!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 7/5/2009
And so it is in our world today. The entertainers get all the glory and those who defend us with their lives are not given a second thought. What a sad situation, indeed. Excellent pairing, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/5/2009
Yes, sad indeed, Lori. Well said, my friend.
Reviewed by Bennett Kremen 7/5/2009
Why trivia trumps what's most important has always troubled me too.
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