by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Tuesday, August 11, 2009
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Sometimes I wonder about normality, just expressing a little of what I've learned in life about some people.
Some times normality
might be a formality
Formed in heads of cabbage
who can't handle their own
Their nose go up
figuring everyone else corrupt
When their bullchit stinks worse
but others they curse
They act and feel like
they are God's gift to earth
but been screwed up
every since birth
Uncover the total package
there might not be a nickels worth
Sit your ten cent azz down
before someone makes change
You're no better and just as strange
Let he without sin cast the first rock
stand back and watch millions will
jump on the perfect clock
As the clock ticks on into the future
their bullchit will continue to nurture
and let it be no surprise
they're walking around in disguise
viewing you with some type despise
through wide open blood shot eyes
fumbling even their own tries
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|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Be sure that it doeesn't escape me how cleverly you get your messages across, Grady...and I enjoy reading :o) Write on, friend!!
Blessings and Love - Micke
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Many people think they are better than God, and they are the ones who end up looking stoopid; you can't outdo God, no matter how much they try! Well done, Gem; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|SEEMS LIKE YOU'RE ANNOYED WITH GOD...YOURSELF...AND OTHERS. ANNOYED WITH GOD BECAUSE HE HAS THE AUDACITY TO CHOOSE A VESSEL THAT HAS BEEN 'MESSED' UP SINCE BIRTH...ANNOYED WITH YOURSELF BECAUSE IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN YOU BUT YOU THINK YOU'RE STRANGE AND...ANNOYED AT OTHERS BECAUSE THEY 'KNOW' THEIR REDEEMER LIVES AND YOU DON'T. NOW, WHAT IS NORMAL? AND CONSIDER SOMETHING... FOR ALL HAVE SINNED...AND...BEEN 'FORGIVEN' FOR COMING SHORT...THIS INCLUDES US ALL. WE CAN'T PLEASE EVERYBODY...DON'T EVEN TRY...BUT WE CAN PLEASE GOD...BY TRYING. GOOD WRITE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|So many do believe they are god's gift. Well done.|