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Frozen Nation
by Louisa A Dobbins
Tuesday, January 05, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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See, you never know. This was not my initial inspiration. |
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God has frozen His nation.
He has cleaned up His air.
But we will continue to kill ourselves,
with more pollutions, poisons and germs.
Cover your mouth if you cough.
Stop sharing blunts.
Cover your head and feet when you sleep.
And cover your STD's when you creep.
Louisa A Dobbins
(c) 2010
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
1/7/2010 |
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| There's some real punch in this one, go Louisa! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/7/2010 |
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Apt and timely advice, Louisa. Sadly needed I'm afraid. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/5/2010 |
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| GOOD WRITE. BY THE WAY...WHAT WAS YOUR INITIAL INSPIRATION? THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/5/2010 |
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But we will continue to kill ourselves,
with more pollutions, poisons and germs.
So very sadly true. |
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