|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very well, an older piece of yours that I finally got around to and I am glad I did as it provided excellent insight in your style and voice. I love the imagery in this.|
|Reviewed by Richard Hiebner
|"Alas, age knows all too well what youth denies ... " So true a statement ... wise words that touch the soul. What a well woven piece of poetic tapestry. Thank you for sharing.|
|Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
|Wow ! Absolutely awesome writing.
Take care Tony
|Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
|"her lesson to be learned of flowered lies"
Michelle, this is a poignant and powerful poem that transports my heart back in time. Beautiful! ~leslie
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The age-old dilemma of spring hormones colliding with wise experience, accelerated by the long days of a short summer. You paint it well.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|UNFORTUNATELY, IT IS ALWAYS...EASIER SAID...THAN DONE...SOMETIMES WHEN GIVING ADVICE, THIS FACT IS FORGOTTEN BECAUSE...PERHAPS... REMEMBERING WOULD REMIND ONE THAT THEY TOO, AT ONE TIME, WERE VULNERABLE. A VERY WELL DONE PIECE...MOST ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING MICHELLE AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Magnificent poem.Great work.take care|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Michelle,the youthful mind is often guided along a path whose values are far less complicated than those that have gathered empirical data long -- immediate gratification often finds refuge among such parochial thinking -- this work demonstrates you have mastered the black art of poetry and its innumerable nuances with a special flare my friend -- peace and love be with you always -- JIM|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Masterful and full of wisdom. Youth is wasted on the young or so I've been told. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Magic. I especially like the line, "age knows all too well what youth denies." Well done. A joy to read, as always. J'nia|
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|Beautiful expression of youthful passion and its dangers. Yet, without those lessons, there would be no wisdom in the years to come. Very nicely done!
Best of all things to you and yours,
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautiful masterpiece you have painted here, Michelle. I'm a big fan of your writing.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|The range here is exceptionally wide, Michelle, you cover miles in a short space...the breadth is so impressive...that's what strikes me most. I like!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Love reading your work, Michelle.....you are an artist with your words.|
|Reviewed by Karen Nivens
|Beautiful, do you have a link to the art? I could not find it online and would love to reread your work with the picture along side.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|What an ageless wonder, love the sincerity that is intertwined within...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|beautiful writing-such a way with words and poety!|