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Mike Ill

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korean whores
by Mike Ill

Sunday, October 06, 2002

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she did not mind the
vomit still warm
on the bottoms of my pants
and the tips of my
worn out
boots
"you use these?"
she repeated
until the words broke through
my thick scotch
buzz.
"yes"
so it was done...

and i was back on that
corner on that avenue
where that one girl
once smiled at me
and the sun cut through
the trees
hitting the ground the way
it does
only on cool sunday
afternoons
in the summer
and the smell...
the smell
the SMELL is
where it all comes together
for the...

"sir, you've had too much to drink.
i'm just gonna have to jerk you off"


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Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni 10/19/2002
Gritty and vivid and raw. It doesn't get much better.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/6/2002
I assume this was a memior from a lonely boy lost in a war in Korea long ago.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 10/6/2002
Actually, I don’t see pure filth…I see someone telling it like it is…Hey the world ain’t pretty we all know that right?

I think the title was crappy..and maybe a poor choice. But overall there is much more to this poem than perhaps some might see. I almost see a sad reflection on his behalf. I don't see it as so much as an attack on Women...but rather, a frank look at a tired world that's seen too much. Then again I could be wayyy wrong here...Just My humble opinion. Dani.

Reviewed by R Kimberley 10/6/2002
This was pure filth.
It never ceases to amaze me... that men call women whores for what they do...(not that I support it in ANY way mind you) But think on this: Doesn't it make the receiving male a whore as well?
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