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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
3/15/2013 |
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| I like word play as well-well pat I think what you have written here is like me sometimes-I have thrown away some paper only to go back to it and go Hmmmm-well done |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/9/2013 |
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A fun write to read Most enjoyable
thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/8/2012 |
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I love word play. You have done well, Pat. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Duke LaRance |
5/30/2012 |
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Very well done...even if one tried to explain art (poetry) to a Philistine, he would still be a Philistine. I'm glad that I'm one of the lucky delirious ones....
duke larance ~ the drugstore cowboy poet
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
5/13/2012 |
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Many chuckles over this fanciful zig zaggy poem of delight! I thoroughly enjoyed your offering, Pat. More, please?
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/9/2012 |
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| I like this, although you put it under mainstream, I see kid poem, One child always tring to cross the line and the other wouldn't think of it....well I guess that could apply to about any two people come to think of it. anyway, I had very specific little people in mind when I read this. :) |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/8/2012 |
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How wonderfully lively and fun!!! Well done, Pat!!!
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
5/7/2012 |
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Pat, A delicious and breath of fresh air poem!
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
5/6/2012 |
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Irrepressibly unique and sonic and rich in imagination!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/6/2012 |
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I jig with a line… But there are those who can zig or zag if they wish with or without a line, as long as they are being farcical in the process. At least until they run out of time. ;-)
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
5/6/2012 |
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Punctual piddle-do's... forever ryhming with time.
Whimisical zig upon zag !! Hilarious ! Pat
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/5/2012 |
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i loved Sandra's, 'Pedal, Antoinette'
and i love this - they share a certain 'madness'
that's witty and so so clever and insightful
without being in the slightest preachy or boring
yes, Pat!
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
5/5/2012 |
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| Inventive word perdacious. Coupled with piddle I had to check my fly for damp spots because ya just never know. I prefer zagging to zigging but that's just me. What I really used to like was zig-zag, a handy tool of the 70's that I outgrew but sometimes wonder why. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
5/5/2012 |
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| That line you don't have,,,,, Well, it must have had a hook on it, cause you certainly reeled me in. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
5/5/2012 |
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| Sooo funny and creative. Goodness. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/5/2012 |
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| I'm dizzy. I say I am dizzy. But I made it through the minefield of tongue twisters with hardly a scratch. But I'm dizzy. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
5/5/2012 |
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It's like you're darned if you do and you're darned if you don't! Well put!! Thank you! I had to chuckle!!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/5/2012 |
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| Very much enjoyed this clever write, Pat |
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