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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/13/2012 |
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Oh the dreaded Broken Heart that I sure know well and yes love sometimes can hurt but we must move forward hard or not relationships always are. Great writing Laura
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
6/12/2012 |
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| all of mine have been free. Where have you been shopping? |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/12/2012 |
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Love is fickle *Jerry* But better off if based on
outer looks...once again you capture inner feelings!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/12/2012 |
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| Jerry, Your last line gives one a reason to pause, always a good read! |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/12/2012 |
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| Can't really buy them. but the rent is often pretty cheap. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/12/2012 |
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Jerry,
many have said it here before me. you have again penned the subject exactly with poetic expertise.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
6/12/2012 |
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need. 'need' buys love's lives because of all the other things we need in life, 'love' is the main thing we 'need' to survive. so, where ever it comes from...we buy it. thanks for the share
asa |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/12/2012 |
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"...Who is it then that buys love's lies?.." I'm thinking we all do,,, at one time or another,,, at least if we're lucky. What's that old saying? "Better to have loved and lost....." Even after losing a love, there are blessings to count.
Nice one Jerry, makes you stop and think. Dick
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/12/2012 |
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It's never easy when its over....but oftentimes it's not the person we miss....it's the relationship...Kool write, Jerry!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/12/2012 |
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| I don't think I have ever loved very deeply...I HAVE loved, but I always reserve or hold back, I guess so I don't get hurt...e |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/12/2012 |
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I agree with Ruan 150% you can give all your love and devotion to another, but if it is not returned in like manner love's flame will slowly die. Just as lies kill that love once had. There comes a time you must become wise even if changes have been made.
Very good Jerry, it's as though you have read the minds of many who have been there.
I loved this very well done piece
Love and Light'
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Ruan Burke |
6/12/2012 |
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The trouble with love is we give it everything we have got and, when the other doesn't appreciate the love and loyalty, something inside of us dies.
You have it spot on - Love is indeed the greatest liar of them all. |
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