Golden Pleasure
by Ragno Donna
Saturday, June 16, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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missing my man badly |
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My heart bleeds
for your
touch,
your lips
against my
softness
Your charms
deeply
within
my
aching
cave
of
golden
pleasure.
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
7/7/2012 |
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| seductive...nice one |
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| Reviewed by Shirley Houston |
6/29/2012 |
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| Beautiful, sensual and profound! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/19/2012 |
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| That aching cave of golden pleasure sure is a charmer for certain sure! Alluring and beautifully expressed, Ragno. Exotic xx |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/17/2012 |
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I GOT "SHOTGUN!" He better get back soon, there's a line forming.
But seriously, this is really NICE, he's a lucky guy. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/17/2012 |
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Short but poignant, and, a bit racy. I like that.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/17/2012 |
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| WoW! Hurry home, man. |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/17/2012 |
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Ragno,
Hopefully you won't have to miss him too long, passionate write.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
6/16/2012 |
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That "cave of golden pleasure" sure sounds great to me, Ragno. So sorry, though, for your "bleeding heart."
Good poem, my friend.
Mark |
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