|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|great thoughts-very motivational--well done|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Hey you could be a coach!I'm convinced. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Halleluiahs & Amen!!
May I Join You on Your Cruise?
(love your bio image on deck w/pen & paper & wine)
Sail On & Write On Board!!
Love's Balm & Healing Presence
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|A lovely uplifting poem, Pat|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Charge! That was down right inspirational Pat. Here's to healing and soaring.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|This so reminds me of something I wrote long ago "OUT with the old and IN with the new...get rid of those demons who lied to you. Dispense with the wicked and the things that we fear. Throw out the evil self evident and clear. You're on the right path without any doubt. Make room for true happiness once everyone's out."|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
For I shall heal and soar again...peace in your heart mdf
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|While reading this, I felt ample resolution being not just realized, but well-defined. "..demons of dullard/despair.." "...refuge of clamoring doubts..." For me, the glint comes from these words: "Chant no more/the annoying dirge". The command of that clause holds no question. Strength comes off this page like a flexed muscle that had been resting and unapparent. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Why am I thinking Shakespeare? “Out damned spot!” Sounds like it's time to take charge and be positive about things. Bravo!
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Oh, yes! You will soar!
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|You go girl! Your words make me feel victorious for you. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Miss Wisdom (Reader)
|This touched my heart. You are soaring already! <3|
|Reviewed by Edward Phillips
|Pat: I drank too much last night on a harbor cruise. You have expresssed my feelings perfectly. Everybody out! For I shall heal and soar again. But not today...|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Somehow, this made me think of the time Jesus commanded the demons to leave a man, and they begged to go into the herd of pigs nearby instead. (they really needed a home, didn't they?) Jesus allowed it, but the herd of pigs then plunged over a cliff. Apparently, they were as upset at the prospect of devils' rule as you are.
Then, the song comes to mind..."Turn your eyes upon Jesus, look full in His wonderful face, and the things of earth will grow strangely dim in the light of His glory and grace."
God bless you, Pat, as you chart that new course.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|give them the boot Pat make 'em flee for safety elsewhere
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|I know you will!
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|And by all means Pat, lock the door....Then soar as high as you can go. The time is NOW...lol
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|That it! Give them fair warning and then pick up the soon-to-be bloodied meat cleaver!|