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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/4/2012 |
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| Specialness comes through in these lines: "an essence of finery/the one I have picked/among the sundry". Very fine. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/1/2012 |
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Oh! such beauty in your lines
for your Love of Life *Carolee*
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/1/2012 |
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| Wonderful write. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
8/30/2012 |
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My wife and daughter are my flowers. Great as always Lilly
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
8/30/2012 |
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Who's the orb?
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
8/30/2012 |
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| endearingly divine. |
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
8/30/2012 |
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This is beautiful, such elegance in the simple holding of your flower. A life essence that you give it to grow and unfold. Love my friend, supreme love to unfold those petals and it grows.
Di |
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| Reviewed by Teresa Walker |
8/30/2012 |
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I have three beautiful flowers that are creative beauties! Two that sing like sirens and one that paints like no other. Their budding beauty matches their hearts as well...
This was beautiful...my friend!
Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/30/2012 |
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Such a wonderful thought. But I'm still wondering what you can hold in the palm of your hand other than a dying flower. A baby panda, perhaps? A chick hatching from an egg?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
8/30/2012 |
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Carolee ~
Beautiful blossoms and tenderness in delicate essence.
Sweet poetic write.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
8/30/2012 |
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The joy of holding something this precious dear Lady Lily. Again you have written beauty from your heart.
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
8/30/2012 |
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There is nothing more delicate than a flower and no love more tender than that in comparison. Wonderful write sweet lady!
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
8/30/2012 |
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| Delicate strength, is it possible? Apparently so. As I have come to expect when I see you have posted new, I am charmed, delighted, and treated to a special, special trip to "lovelyland". Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
8/30/2012 |
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There is a great tenderness in this poem, very very beautiful.
I can not even pick a favorite line, they are all wonderful
Again a wonderful gem Carolee |
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
8/30/2012 |
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Another beautiful offering Carolee, to be revered and loved so much is simply wonderful.
Gail |
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
8/30/2012 |
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| Beautifully written ... soft and tender ... |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
8/30/2012 |
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Favorite lines: "for you are my flower, heart of my heart,
the one I have picked among the sundry," Breathless and
Mindful!!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
8/30/2012 |
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Absolutely beautifully written poetry Laura
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
8/30/2012 |
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what a wonderful vision of holding a budding blossom in your care
budd |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/30/2012 |
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Your poem is a lovely blossom of words.
And Kudos on your baby bat rescues! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/30/2012 |
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| Aw, that is a very nice way of putting the young ones as the begin to grow and blossom. Beautiful, Carol. |
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