|Reviewed by Chaitanya Mandava (Reader)
|what you meant to say was ok...improve your vocabulary and spellings you will do good.|
|Reviewed by Sally Montoye
|The present is where LIFE IS!!! Good write! Unfortunatly most can't stay in that state of mind for long..the ego wants, the babel begins and we become lost in our minds again. Looking forward to more of your poetry!!!!!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|No way dear! Let's dream of a better tomorrow! Sometimes today sucks big time.
We plan and work and dream about greater things. At least I do. This is what makes the present bearable. I found this out when I took my head out of the sand. bill
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|The present is not always
fun and games.......