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| Reviewed by Lynn Barry |
3/25/2003 |
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| Good stuff...very clever and thought provoking... |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/4/2003 |
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Loved this..so moving, and the expression, right on the target!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/1/2003 |
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Day-am, missed this one too.
Been too busy to flutter around to see what's been written.
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
2/20/2003 |
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| Your poor, poor, poor, sad little thing you. Ok...no more tears (kidding or otherwise) This was great! |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
2/13/2003 |
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Glad it's fiction,you just keep getting better all the time.I loved this one.
sssmmmoootttccchhh
from your aussie pal....kay |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/12/2003 |
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This was very impressive as is your art
Love
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
2/12/2003 |
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| This was so sad...thank God it's fiction. The sketch is perfect for it. Thanks, Ron! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/12/2003 |
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| perfect write, sketchman! and a good drawing, too! love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
2/12/2003 |
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| perfect |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
2/12/2003 |
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| Ron I love this...so much...it seems when our families need us then we are worth something to them...when the need is gone so are we...This was very impressive as is your art..Floria |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/12/2003 |
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| Wonderful write. I am always impressed with what you come up with and the art work you place with it. |
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
2/12/2003 |
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| Great write, Ron...the art is fantastic, too, and suits your writing perfectly... |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
2/12/2003 |
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| Great work, Ron. Enjoyed reading this. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/11/2003 |
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| Great poetry. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/11/2003 |
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| excellent write! love the charactertures in your art... |
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| Reviewed by Heather Stevens |
2/11/2003 |
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| Your very realist and down to earth, yet I don't care too much for the flow. At one moment you’re rhyming and the next it kind of jerks, like when you are asking a question. Questions are important because it makes the reader think; it just seems like it could be smoother. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/11/2003 |
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2-11-03
Sounds Like Most Of Humanity! But, You Have a Talent To Draw Things & Write__
Most People Just Sit Around & Get Loaded.
I Say Make Best Of What You've Got...There's No Greater Freedom Than Being Alone, Free To Do that What You Do Best!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
2/11/2003 |
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| Nice one, Ron! :) |
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| Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll |
2/11/2003 |
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| I agree great poem and artwork Ron. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
2/11/2003 |
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| Ron, it is so strange how life moves along and the things that happen to us on a daily basis that effect our future. And we seem to loose everything that we found comforting and regular ... till we are left without even our shadow. I understand this Ron and how you feel, for I have felt that way too. Bill |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
2/11/2003 |
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| great thoughts! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
2/11/2003 |
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| Aww...Ron. I know you said fiction, but "My shadow doesn't even follow me anymore"? now that's a sad line if I ever heard one. Great poem and artwork |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
2/11/2003 |
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| Isn't that true, we always complain about one thing or another. It's a Curse! Very creative! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/11/2003 |
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I'll have to come back there's no
art;-)...love the line where even your shadow stopped following you...fantastic!;-) |
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