|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|Erin, You can't change the past, so start from where you are at.
Beautiful write. Thank you for Sharing Carin'
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Heartfelt emotion and excellence in rhyme and flow|
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|A fabulous poem of regret evoking irrisistable emotive response - I love that line "falling off the page..." It is such a 'full of meaning' statement|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Erin, excellent poem. The words and the flow were awesome. Hope evrything turned out ok for you on your family reunion.|
|Reviewed by jing javier
|be glad of life because it gives you the chance to LOVE and to WORK and to PLAY and to LOOK at the stars..--henry van dyke
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|"Falling off the page" this is awesome and I love this line...floria|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|never regret choices made...they all lead to the next page...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|A lot of lives are like this...and it is so sad. Each day the sun comes up, one should have plans, and make plans for the morrow.
Well written. Enjoyed it.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|It was one that made me keep reading...very catchy...Take a bow! Teresa|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|The last stanza is bloody perfect...As is it all....Fantastic writing here Erin...Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|original write here...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Madame X
|I agree with La Belle...nice write here. Very real and well written.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|very deep.. very real..|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Gotta love this one.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh this cuts so deeply. Heartfelt emotion and excellence in rhyme and flow, Erin.|