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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
5/7/2008 |
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Erin, You can't change the past, so start from where you are at.
Beautiful write. Thank you for Sharing Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/9/2003 |
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| Heartfelt emotion and excellence in rhyme and flow |
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| Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) |
3/6/2003 |
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| A fabulous poem of regret evoking irrisistable emotive response - I love that line "falling off the page..." It is such a 'full of meaning' statement |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/27/2003 |
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| Erin, excellent poem. The words and the flow were awesome. Hope evrything turned out ok for you on your family reunion. |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
2/27/2003 |
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be glad of life because it gives you the chance to LOVE and to WORK and to PLAY and to LOOK at the stars..--henry van dyke
great piece! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
2/27/2003 |
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| "Falling off the page" this is awesome and I love this line...floria |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
2/27/2003 |
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| never regret choices made...they all lead to the next page... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/27/2003 |
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A lot of lives are like this...and it is so sad. Each day the sun comes up, one should have plans, and make plans for the morrow.
Well written. Enjoyed it.
~E |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
2/27/2003 |
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| It was one that made me keep reading...very catchy...Take a bow! Teresa |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
2/27/2003 |
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| The last stanza is bloody perfect...As is it all....Fantastic writing here Erin...Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/27/2003 |
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| original write here...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Madame X |
2/27/2003 |
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| I agree with La Belle...nice write here. Very real and well written. |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
2/27/2003 |
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| very deep.. very real.. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
2/27/2003 |
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| Gotta love this one. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
2/27/2003 |
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| Oh this cuts so deeply. Heartfelt emotion and excellence in rhyme and flow, Erin. |
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