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| Reviewed by Lynn Barry |
3/29/2003 |
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| great visual... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/23/2003 |
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Hahahahahah...weeeeeeeee...down we go go go...boom crash....Oh! God that was a tree...duck dive...and jump right on.....here we go again...are you okay daling...do you still have your teeth???
Okay...this was fun thank you ever so much....put your lifejacket on...
Love
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/22/2003 |
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Beautiful write John! Love the imagery!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
3/22/2003 |
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Congradulations for your 101st post, few words say so much, I like this.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
3/22/2003 |
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| I enjoyed this... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/22/2003 |
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You are missing a syllable in the second line.5-7-5.
Lovely just the same. I must try this haiku some day. It is lovely in its brevity. |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/22/2003 |
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| less is more in this case. loved it. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/22/2003 |
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| I love this one! |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
3/22/2003 |
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| Stunningly beautiful.. and my all time season.. I do the fall. |
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