|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hahahahahah...weeeeeeeee...down we go go go...boom crash....Oh! God that was a tree...duck dive...and jump right on.....here we go again...are you okay daling...do you still have your teeth???
Okay...this was fun thank you ever so much....put your lifejacket on...
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Beautiful write John! Love the imagery!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Congradulations for your 101st post, few words say so much, I like this.
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|I enjoyed this...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|You are missing a syllable in the second line.5-7-5.
Lovely just the same. I must try this haiku some day. It is lovely in its brevity.
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|less is more in this case. loved it.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I love this one!|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Stunningly beautiful.. and my all time season.. I do the fall.|