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| Reviewed by Minerva Bloom |
7/11/2003 |
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Reviewed by Reviewed by J Michael Kearney 3/26/2003
As I said before, this is excellent. Very well written!
One small nit with the line, "When I wear uniform I'm not a pig" - could it use an "a," as in "When I wear a uniform...?"
Michael Kearney
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WOW. For some reason, I didn't see this. But then, truly...
It must be because of the bilingual brain-reading and comprehending on my part::::::however, I don't do that with poetry. I take the original-thought whole. And since I'm not an editor, I can only look for the original feeling to point me out--to the creator's direction.
Many times, I don't even see the 'literary mistakes' but then::::: look at T S Eliot and his playful, crazed play of words on how to bend our limited human languages.
Goodness. I am in fear of the literaty.
Minerva~ |
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| Reviewed by Lawrance Lux |
5/28/2003 |
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| American is a view of life. lgl |
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| Reviewed by Diane Hundertmark |
4/15/2003 |
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Peter my dear, it only gets better each time I read it.
Dee |
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| Reviewed by Claywoman |
3/26/2003 |
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| I like it Peter, when are you going to put it to music... |
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| Reviewed by J Michael Kearney |
3/26/2003 |
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As I said before, this is excellent. Very well written!
One small nit with the line, "When I wear uniform I'm not a pig" - could it use an "a," as in "When I wear a uniform...?"
just a thought.
Fine writing. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/26/2003 |
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Nicely done. Much we can do here that can't be done other places.
~E |
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