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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
5/27/2003 |
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William,
An amazing poem. Breathtaking!
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
5/27/2003 |
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William WOW what a King of Poetic Romance you be...this is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/27/2003 |
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Very vivid.....yip!!
Love
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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William,
Excellent imagery so visual.
Beautiful
peggy |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
5/26/2003 |
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Outstanding writing and imagery.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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| Very vivid, a master at work.. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
5/26/2003 |
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Another Great One, William!!
yf
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| Reviewed by Floreann Cawley |
5/26/2003 |
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| Deeply passionate William..Floreann |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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| Oh to be down in the valley! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/26/2003 |
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Now that was excellent..
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Cherokee Sage |
5/26/2003 |
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A fine work, sir.
Peace,
Cherokee |
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| Reviewed by MoNi |
5/26/2003 |
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| A beautiful pen. ~MoNi~ |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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"...The Keepers Host. reciprocated
As she gently reached, for the Royal Staff
Of the fatigued, King Knight
Coated with the nectars,
Of the heaven's above
Hosting her protocol dutiies
She handle the Regal Staff
With much respect..."
Love those lines. Well done, William.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/26/2003 |
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| William you have this down to a science;-) excellent sensual work! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
5/26/2003 |
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| Just a beautiful as the first. |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
5/26/2003 |
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| Terrific write. Excellent! |
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