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|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Ho, bravo! Passionate and direct. Well craffted verse.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
That's the way John to tell it like it is! Very Good!!!!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Telling it like it is with power.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
It's Evil Alright On To Pres Bush!
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|john i couldn't agree with you more my friend,,
we have the same thing here in england,, poor refugees smuggleed into the country by moneyhungry flesh traffiers they don't care about the hardships or discomfort that these people have to endure as long as they get paid up front.. and if some should die along the way well they paid already, it makes you sick doesn't it..
well written john thank you.
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|It is unfathomable to me how anyone could do this, John. We have many such horror stories here in Arizona, also, mostly deaths from trying to walk the desert to a distant city for the oppurtunity to work and send money home to family. Arizona now has watering stations along the usual routes where Coyotes send there "victims". It may seem it helps to bring illegals into this country, and that may be, but to die of dehydration in a desperate attempt to save their destitute families lives in Mexico is too horrible a fate to consider. I cannot condemn these people of poverty for that. Strong, powerful write.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|well writte john!!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|John, you tell it like it is!!! All needs to be heard....thank you for saying it...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
the pain is clearly evident in this raw, intense write...i live in texas, and see this happening way too often...it breaks my heart *tears*
"i don't know which of
you is the greatest evil
two faced official.
together you for a true
axis of evil, pretty, venial
trafficking in human flesh"
outstanding, needed write...this should be required reading for all immigration services and border patrol workers...and anyone caught trafficking humans--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,