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Jerry - On The Slant
by Jackie S Brooks

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A playful 'Tilt' at my friend Jerry Bolton!

Jerry – On The Slant!

It seems that Jerry feels quite lopsided
With a definite tilt to his stance,
He blames it on his computer,
It could not possibly happen by chance!

Jerry claimed to have mislaid his wife Dottie
And he’s admitted to feeling quite muddled,
I wonder if it’s due to the bottle –
His brain being so obviously befuddled!

When I wrote about Old Jack Frost
Jerry mentioned a ‘Hot Buttered Rum!’
But in the heat of Louisiana
I don’t think it agreed with his tum!

Now, I wonder if Dottie’s been found yet
Or is he still searching hard for his wife,
If he ‘s forgotten just where he put her
I would not give two cents for his life!

Perhaps we need to send for young Bailey
If Pamela can spare her a while,
To help Jerry find his dear lady
And hope that on him she’ll still smile!

Now Jerry, the moral of this short story
Is to stay well away from the Rum
With your head and feet on the vertical
Your brain might not feel quite so numb!


Jackie S Brooks
26 September 2003

PS - Anything you say will inevitably be used against you!!

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Reviewed by Jim Dunlap 10/9/2003
Cute and fun seem to fit fairly well.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/27/2003
This was cute and fun to read, a very nice tribute to your friend!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/27/2003 this playful tribute to a friend.

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 9/27/2003
You should see the message Jerry sent me - I'm in trouble, he's promised me 'payback' - "Uh, huh, I'll get ya." (That's part of his message!) So watch out folks, the fun starts here!! I'm looking forward to this - I think!! Jackie <> <
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/26/2003
Cute write :-)
Reviewed by Trixie Love 9/26/2003
LoL...Well, That explains
it all...hehehe
Cute write...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell 9/26/2003
Oh Jackie this is adorable! I do believe Jerry found Dottie - BUT if in fact he didn't it DOES sound like a job for Bailey Ferrol, Private Investigator.....I'll get her to contact him ASAP! GREAT WRITE!!!!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/26/2003
(((hee hee)))

hysterically funny, well written piece *LOL*

well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. *poor jerry--poor dottie!!*
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/26/2003
hehehehehehehehehehehe.....Oh My God!!!

I love the small print!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/26/2003
humorous poem, jackie; enjoyed! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/26/2003
Jeez, Jackie. A guy can't even have a little nip without somebody telling the whole blessed world. Drat.
Reviewed by Sue Hess 9/26/2003
cute...i fought the battle with rum for years and it was a worthy opponent. But I won! Go Jerry!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/26/2003
Hilarious, Jackie! And quite a good poem. Good thing I drink bourbon!
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 9/26/2003
Lol, quite humorous! I'm not laughing at you Jerry but this is very good! ~Z~

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