|Reviewed by Sassy Cat (Reader)
|Dale, I loved not only the words, but the pattern of this poem, how each ends in a one word descriptive of the stanza. Excellent!! You sir, need to post more of these on other sites for us all to enjoy! HUGSSSS
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Chilling write, indeed! Enjoyed this very much, and I agree that dreams can be many different things to many different people.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|You're pretty amazing yourself ;)
Dreams....Good or bad they make for some fantastic fodder for thought. An excellent poem...Enjoyed Dale ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|dale you have something here, for many are bound by images of dreams, I know my mother mentioned something similiar to me, and I have had vile dreams as well, Al|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This moved me so this evening, outstandingly beautiful and haunting,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the tomb in our hearts opens at its own will...
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Well done, very dark and emotive.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|chilled the bones, the thought of chains repulse, the imagery gripping and haunting...Excellent write!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I liked this stanza the best,
"These chains I carry
into my sleep
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|"They touch what I canít feel"---DALE! DALE! DALE! I love this thought and the way you did this.
Excellent work Dale.... I love screaming in your den ;) -lol.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Awesome write and well-said.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
This one touhed me deeply this morning.
I wrote of numbness too. Excellent poetry.
"These dreams astound me
they seem so real
They touch what I canít feel
and become numbing
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! Dale this is a haunting write....and makes me feel sad!!
I really do Hope you can manage to deal with those haunting dreams!!
For the poem... it's very touching and excellently written!!
Love & Hugs Tinky!!