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| Reviewed by Sassy Cat (Reader) |
12/9/2003 |
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Dale, I loved not only the words, but the pattern of this poem, how each ends in a one word descriptive of the stanza. Excellent!! You sir, need to post more of these on other sites for us all to enjoy! HUGSSSS
Sassy *S* |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/24/2003 |
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| Chilling write, indeed! Enjoyed this very much, and I agree that dreams can be many different things to many different people. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/24/2003 |
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You're pretty amazing yourself ;)
Dreams....Good or bad they make for some fantastic fodder for thought. An excellent poem...Enjoyed Dale ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
11/24/2003 |
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| dale you have something here, for many are bound by images of dreams, I know my mother mentioned something similiar to me, and I have had vile dreams as well, Al |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
11/23/2003 |
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This moved me so this evening, outstandingly beautiful and haunting,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/23/2003 |
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the tomb in our hearts opens at its own will...
excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
11/23/2003 |
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| Well done, very dark and emotive. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/23/2003 |
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| chilled the bones, the thought of chains repulse, the imagery gripping and haunting...Excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/23/2003 |
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I liked this stanza the best,
"These chains I carry
into my sleep
clattering " |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
11/23/2003 |
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"They touch what I can’t feel"---DALE! DALE! DALE! I love this thought and the way you did this.
Excellent work Dale.... I love screaming in your den ;) -lol.
Thank You,
Emilie
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/23/2003 |
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Awesome write and well-said.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
11/23/2003 |
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Dale,
This one touhed me deeply this morning.
I wrote of numbness too. Excellent poetry.
"These dreams astound me
they seem so real
incredibly
They touch what I can’t feel
and become numbing
pathetically "
Taylor
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/23/2003 |
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Wow!! Dale this is a haunting write....and makes me feel sad!!
I really do Hope you can manage to deal with those haunting dreams!!
For the poem... it's very touching and excellently written!!
Love & Hugs Tinky!! |
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