|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Nice use of metaphor, smart use of simile and intelligent pacing making the piece flow with increasing dramatic vigor! The ending seals it all: the confessional tone and the admission of Love... Great writing, Jeff!|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|I just loved this Jeff, this was really High, and so adorened too, with all the elemnets, missing ones included, a poem every man falls into, when the time perfect, I am glad you learned the game, sublties and all, a l|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Jeff this is incredibly beautiful. Scanturaries are so few and each one we find is precious. Speaks to the soul with intense honesty.|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|BRILLIANT work, Jeff!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|Then you came to the table
You sheltered me and called my bluffs
Never asking questions -- you knew every card I held
Never once assuming anything -- you knew every rule
No presumptions; no pretense -- your cards were always spades
Ever encouraging me -- teaching me how to trump the Trumps
Jeff!!! YOU have outdone yourself with this write..the yes of the Beloved should be aware of these precious words...
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
You held me with this Jeff......Amazing...intense poetry.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Fascinating composition, Jeff. Truly enjoyed!|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|An interest angle to matters of the heart.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This struck a nerve...it's beautiful and just plain wonderfully written Jeff!!
I like to play cards....by I building cardhouses...not poker!!
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|Another great job! I love it. Also love spades.. when I'm not writing, I'm in Playsite ;-)|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Outstanding write....poetic perfection...love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|What a Romantic, Beautiful and
Loving Poem! Excellent!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Fantastic loving write!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|an excellent poem on unconditional love ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Exceptional poetry Jeff! Beautifully crafted, a joy to read!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|"I could ever hope to have." great personal piece Jeff, hope she likes it. I just wrote a poem called "Hope." I hope you read it. This hope thing is addictive. Cheers G|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was outstanding, I loved this poem very much, Excellent poetry!
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Remarkably well written. I like how there are no periods for the punctuation but there are semi-colons and such. It is smooth and clean. I like the cleanliness and it's very sweet and tender. Good job!! I really liked it. It's not choppy either. Smooth and sweet.
Like a twilight of candlelight is shining upon a barely lit room. That's what it reminds me of.
In Prayer, Brittany