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| Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield |
1/22/2004 |
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A beautiful conception...A true and glorious meaning. Enjoyed tremendously!
Antoinette |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
1/18/2004 |
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| Lol. Intriquing prespective. I think a poem is born not just merely by the head but by heart and soul and is born on paper. A real treat this one is. |
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| Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader) |
1/16/2004 |
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| that was a very easy delivery! Nice job |
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
1/15/2004 |
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| This a very unusual concept. But a very good write |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/13/2004 |
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| well conceived and nurtured poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
1/13/2004 |
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| Wow, interesing indeed. Awesome write. Thanks for stopping by. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/12/2004 |
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mood changes became noticeable.
poignant line..
it's rather amazing how one becomes MOODY whilst one is birthing a poem...well done Abdi...
a unique write indeed...*smile*
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
1/12/2004 |
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| I found myself here reading this awesome poem Abdi...simply brilliant writing...floria |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/9/2004 |
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| BRILLIANT work! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/7/2004 |
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| Wonderful metaphor! Excellent poem!The birthing process is very close to what a poet goes through. I once did a poem on being pregnant with words and how relieved we are when they are finally born;-) |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
1/6/2004 |
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| Ah, perfect metaphor for us writers: for, indeed, we birth our poems and prose, then nurture and protect it like a baby; daring anyone to harm it. Grrrr! Excellent, Abdi. ~~Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/6/2004 |
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| Well expressed! Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/6/2004 |
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(((abdinoor)))
and how lovely are your children--birthed through pain
a most intelligent, cleverly penned piece--*BRAVO, dear brother*
a keeper--thank you
((((HUGS)))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
1/6/2004 |
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| This one had me going thought provoking so well done. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/6/2004 |
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(((Abdi-Noor)))
I really like this; this is a very unique perspective on how a poem is birthed! Very well done; truly enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/6/2004 |
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| Most interesting write! |
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