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| Reviewed by (Reader) |
2/13/2004 |
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Hi Sara,
This is taking dramatics’ to the extreme; we know you have to see the dentist again, but using a 9 mm for taking your teeth out is not a good idea, use a 7.65mm instead.
They make a far neater job.
Watch out for lead poisoning, it could kill you. and it also makes the coffin heavy to carry as well.
Big Smile.
Hesione Rhadamanthus.
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
2/13/2004 |
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| Sorry everyone, the class I am taking this month is really, really hard and a lot of work. As I do my assignments I keep wondering what the suicide rate is among Accountants as the subject is making me want to shoot myself so I can get out of it. Not seriously though. I should have written this at the end, but I didn't want to take away from the impact of the poem. When I wrote it, it startled me. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/13/2004 |
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Been there in the battlefield of emotions...know the feeling...and the reality of it!!
Not worth the effort Sara...because I would not like to share Hell with someone tha always hurting others...I think you of all people knows why I am saying this!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Gary Gebert |
2/13/2004 |
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Very dramatic. A subject most like to metaphor around rather than just plain spell it out.
Gary |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/12/2004 |
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| powerful suicidal vision of reality ... |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
2/12/2004 |
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| Don't do it, I'll bear your children! |
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