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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU	1/26/2013
Salutations to Poet William Bonilla. You have delivered the key to ignite the engine of political awareness. I did enjoy the reading of "The Shortest Story Ever Told", and leave it in good company of Abraham Lincoln words: "This country, with its institutions, belongs to the people who inhabit it. Whenever they shall grow weary of the existing government, they can exercise their constitutional right of amending it, or their revolutionary right to dismember it or overthrow it. ¯ Abraham Lincoln" In respect and admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Jansen Estrup	10/10/2012
Someone, Mr. Bonilla, should dissent from this 'love fest' and it might as well be me. Your story is too short. It needs the rest of the sentence. "We the People of the United States, in order to form a more perfect union", etc. and that other important part about our 'common good' ... So odd that we would be doing the Oligarch's will as if we were Hessian mercenaries. 'Big' government is just a front for the monied class and our founding fathers warned us against a) corporations b) political parties c) standing armies - even so, I admire your passion - I just think it misdirected against We The People, who are (supposed to be) the government. Thus our passion and frustration are used against ourselves. Best ...
Reviewed by CJ Heck	5/28/2011
Here Here and Amen! Short, sweet, to the point. Hugs, CJ
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson	1/20/2011
Short and sweet and to the point!..BRAVO...M
Reviewed by Regis Auffray	11/28/2010
Succinct and to the point, William. Love and peace to you, Regis
Reviewed by Jim Spain	9/17/2010
Sorry Mate, I can't make a sensible comment. Aussie is too far from everyday USA. But we certainly join in your horror of recent catastrophies. "ooroo" Jim
Reviewed by Heather Burns	3/31/2010
sure thing.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy	3/22/2010
lol:) Sheila
Reviewed by Georg Mateos	3/22/2010
If that's for Putin you have my vote, but if you are referring to that Iranian Am-a-nut-job fellow you have my bullets! Georg
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	3/21/2010
I agree In Christs Love Michelle~
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	3/21/2010
ABSOLUTELY!~