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Lonely Girl: Temptation
By Chessly Lynn Nesci
Tuesday, April 06, 2010

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The lonely girl and the sexy waiter danced for hours caressing each other. She grabbed his hand and took him to a part of the ship where they could be alone.~Peace~

          Lonely Girl: ~Temptation~



The Lonely Girl had been very lonely since her Jamaican adventure and ready for some more fun in the sun. This time she was on a very large cruise liner called; Temptation. The lonely girl was ready for some lovin without any regrets.  After getting off her plane she noticed a very fit tall gentlemen in front of her. She followed him to the airport shuttle and slide beside him. His breath smelled of wintergreen and he had very expensive dress shoes on. There was some electricity between the two of them because The Lonely Girl started to sweat. She wanted to talk to him but he wouldn't make eye contact. When he got out of the shuttle a good looking petite blonde approached him and gave him a kiss. They both walked hand in hand onto the cruise.


 The Lonely Girl followed quietly behind checking out all the handsome men around her.  She was not going to get discouraged because the first guy she noticed was taken. Hopefully, she could find one that would trip her trigger. The Lonely Girl was blessed with the perfect body, and every man had a rise in their Levi’s when she walked by. She was looking for love on this cruise; but would settle for a little passion. The first morning started with some relaxation near the pool. The lonely girl wore a white lace bikini that showed off her big breast, and tiny butt.


She got out to the pool early and started getting into her raunchy Jackie Collins novel. She always got turned on when she read the steamy sex scenes. Several minutes had passed before an extremely HOT guy asked if she wanted a cocktail. The Lonely Girl was so turned on by this waiter that she was speechless. Her neck and face were beat red when she noticed he was excited too! How could she not notice the HUGE sock in his tight white shorts?  Wait a minute, there was no way that could really be him inside his pants. 


 The Lonely Girl ordered a Bloody Mary and watched this extremely sexy guy walk away.  After he returned they talked for a little bit and decided to meet after he got off work. All day long she imagined having sex with this man. After reading her Jackie Collins book and drinking all day in the sun she was ready to meet this sexy gentleman. When she walked back to her room she noticed she was a little drunk. After fumbling with her key many times she finally made it inside. She had forgotten sunscreen and looked like a fried red tomato. She slipped on her black sheer dress, high heels, and put her hair in a loose bun. She was ready to rock the boat.


When she saw the handsome waiter she almost lost her lunch. He was wearing tan slacks and a loose hawaiian shirt. His hair was slicked back and his blue eyes sparkled in the moonlight. “Are you ready to hit the disco?” “Yes, said The Lonely Girl.” They walked hand in hand in the moonlight to the dance on the top level of the cruise. As soon as they reached the dance floor the band played Open Arms by Journey. The handsome waiter held her very close and started to caress her back. She could feel his package and knew there was no sock in his pants.


They danced for hours caressing each other. She grabbed his hand and took him to a part of the ship where they could be alone. She undressed him and couldn’t believe how gorgeous his body was. He started kissing her neck and then removed her lace bra. The Lonely Girl let him have his way with her and moaned in ecstasy. She was so loud a couple giggled as they were walking by the lovers.  After having explosive sex the handsome waiter carried her to her room and put her to bed. When she woke up there was a note with some chocolates on her pillow….To be continued





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Reviewed by nancy taylor 4/15/2010
The lonely girl is an independent young woman to take a cruise by herself, let alone pick up a waiter. Great eroticism. Can't wait to read more about this fascinating character. I'd like to know more about her, however. How old is she? Where is her family? What happened with her last boyfriend, and goodness, why is she so lonely? She seems outgoing and buoyant, and appears to be quite an adventurer. How does she earn her living? Where does she live? Basically, I love the sex but want to know more about the character.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/9/2010
Very enticing, Chessly. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/7/2010
Been in a few ships myself, where that Lonely Girl Temptation was? cos...I know some secluded places myself! (LOL)


PS. writing this review in the cold showers room!

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 4/6/2010
Hey, Chessly, sexy! This is my kind of story. It would be more personal if you did use names rather than "The Lonely Girl" and "Waiter". Actually, by this time he is so much more than a waiter. And, Jeeze, what about us guys with just an average "package"?
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 4/6/2010
I think this story is much more erotic than your usual writings. And I like it! I think the general name "lonely girl" is justified because it explains her being so hot! I look foward to the sequel.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/6/2010
Love the raw energy of your passionate speak it the way it really is...the use of just calling her Lonely Girl works well at first but may want to add some personalization to her with a name in next installment (just a suggestion). Otherwise I am hooked on this one and what will come next.

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