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One Night Stand
By Chessly Lynn Nesci
Friday, May 28, 2010

Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Anna gave him a quick kiss and said goodbye. She would love to see him again but afraid he would just turn her away… For now all she has is the sweet memory of a one night stand. ~Peace~

 ~One Night Stand~


Anna had just received a phone call from her girlfriend saying she had front row tickets to; THE  BLACK EYED PEAS. Anna wasn’t a huge fan but knew it would be a great concert. She was hesitant at first because she didn’t want to leave her little guy behind. Being a great mother was the most important thing to her and she never thought of herself. This time she was close to a nervous breakdown and needed time away.


The three hour drive was stressful because it down poured the entire time. About 30 minutes before arriving they stopped and got a couple little tiny bottles of booze to take the edge off. Anna got a Captain mini and her girlfriend bought UV Blue Vodka. They sang the rest of the drive and arrived when the rain stopped. When they got to the hotel they stopped to freshen up, then jumped on a shuttle to the concert. As soon as they made it through the line they headed for the booze. They both chugged three beers before heading back into the crowds.


The Black Eyed Peas were fantastic, and Anna was so glad she came. They were rockin down the house!!  She was definitely feeling loose when the concert was over and stepped across the street to a popular hang out. Her friend zoned in on a very handsome tall dark gentleman and they started doing "slippery nipple shots". Anna was somehow pushed up against this guy and she felt something. Was it the booze or did she have a thing for him? They laughed and held hands as they left the bar and went outside.


 It was the coolest outside garden she had ever seen with big screen TVs and white couches everywhere. They sat down and continued to talk when Anna jumped on his lap. She sat on top of him and started kissing him in front of everyone. After passionately making out they decided to take it a little farther and returned to the hotel room for some hanky panky. This good looking funny guy seemed to be extremely popular, and knew how to have a good time. 


They held hands in the elevator and couldn’t wait to rip each other’s clothes off!  Yes, it was turning into a one night stand. Anna was usually a very good girl and never had a one night stand before. He was a good guy and she knew it the minute she met him. She also knew it couldn’t last because they lived to far away from each other. When they got into the room they started kissing and then ended up in bed with most of their clothes off. They were getting very serious when Anna’s phone rang. Her girlfriend was pissed that she left her at the bar.


 They hurried up and jumped into the car and arrived at the bar five minutes later. Her girlfriend had already gotten into a cab and was waiting at the door of the hotel when they arrived. She wasn’t very happy that Anna got the good guy. Anna never got the good guy so she was still in shock. He decided to stay and slept next to Anna all night without touching her. She wanted him so bad and he was such a gentleman. The next morning was very awkward as the three of them just hung out and watched TV until check out.


Anna gave him a quick kiss and said goodbye. She would love to see him again but afraid he would just turn her away…For now all she has is the sweet memory of a one night stand…. ~Peace~




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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/16/2011
Lots of things going on here: kids, good guys, booze, and the Peas. The work seems to be a bit autobiographical–as is mine. I don't like the Black-Eyed Peas much either, except for that single by Fergie, Big Girls Don't Cry.

Introduce conversation into your stories and they will become much more vivid and lifelike.

I wrote a poem recently called, One Night Stand. My musician friends tell me it is not like that at all.

Reviewed by John Coppolella 7/21/2010
See, you have to have faith. There are good men left in the world, even though I do not know how Anna felt about the fact that she left never knowing how things might have been, if she had just pushed the envelope a little. That is more intriguing in this story is that you left the reader anticipating and wanting more. I hate you for that, thank you!
Great perspective from female characters.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE 5/29/2010
There is nothing wrong with this story. The guy was just being a gentlemen, and he may have been sexual shy. Just because there are two women does not make a threesome. Your story was well crafted and easy to understand.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/29/2010
Chessly...never mind the dudes below, but one thing is sure, if I ever get a one-night-"stand" I will consult my doctor...and brag about it like no tomorrow! (LOL)


Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/28/2010
I liked this character and could well understand her, the life of a single mother is often stressful to the point that when they do get a night out they need to make the most of it. As for Mark's confusion it seems to me they were almost at the point of having sex when the call came from her friend, then sharing the room with her friend in the next bed he was a gentleman and tried avoiding embarrassing Anna. However I think she should have got a phone number for who knows what may have come from a one night stand...
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 5/28/2010
First off, and after reading the way I write, you just know that I would be very interested in "slippery nipple shots." What, please tell me, is a "slippery nipple shot?" Secondly I'm a bit confused. Did Anna or did Anna not get laid? I mean, if she didn't and the guy slept next to her all night without touching her... Hmmm? I am confused. However, as always, my friend, Chessly, you did create a very interesting story with a very interesting -- though I am confused -- character.

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