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Am I Wife or Daughter?
By Brenda Hill
Last edited: Wednesday, February 25, 2009
Posted: Sunday, January 27, 2008
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No matter the genre, I write stories about women in crisis, mainly because I've faced so many in my lifetime. Some I've worked through, others are still a struggle. I try to show the problem and some possible solutions in my fiction while celebrating the inner strength we sometimes forget we have. “Am I Wife or Daughter” is based on my own struggle with my mother's care. As in life, sometimes there are no solutions. Only choices we must make.
EXCERPT:
For tonight’s special dinner, I wanted everything perfect. I set the table with our wedding China and placed a white pillar candle on each side of the spring floral arrangement I’d splurged on at the last minute. An outrageously expensive crown roast simmered in the oven and I even had wine sauce for the ice cream.
Standing back to admire the table, I hugged myself, almost giddy from the news I’d received that afternoon. After five years of marriage, three spent engaging in endless checkups and medical procedures, Don and I were finally going to be parents. I couldn’t wait to tell him.
Just as I placed the Caesar’s salad on the table, the phone rang.
Oh, no! Who could it be? Since I hadn’t wanted to chance unexpected company this evening, I told all my friends that I’d be out for the evening. It couldn’t be my mother; this afternoon I’d made sure she had plenty of her medicine to last for a couple of days and I’d even taken her a casserole for dinner. I’d told her some story about wanting a ‘Date Night’ with my husband, something I’d heard on a talk show that couples should do to keep the romance alive. I hadn’t told her about the baby. I’d wanted to tell Don first.
Desperately wanting to ignore the persistent ringing, my conscience nagged me. What if Mom was having an emergency? For the past few years her health had deteriorated, and she relied on me more and more.
While debating whether or not to answer, the machine picked up the call and I heard her voice.
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
8/18/2008 |
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| I believe dear Brenda, that all women are everything, everyone, multi-tasking, loving never ending persons. I enjoyed your writing and only someone who has, been there/done that can bring life to the words. We by nature are caregivers and if parented with love, we shall continue the never ending, loving, caregiving, nurturing circle. Sunshine and prosperity to you, CarolHawks |
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