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We'll Take Good Care of You: Chapter 13
By Elizabeth A. Price
Last edited: Thursday, August 23, 2007
Posted: Thursday, August 23, 2007
This short story is rated "PG13" by the Author.

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A little change of pace.

Chapter 13

 

 

 

Wednesday 11:30 p.m. Post Anesthesia Care Unit

            Terri Shultz legs wobbled as she was helped off the gurney by Emily Rosen, RN. Her eyes watched the floor rush up to greet her and then recede as her body adjusted to standing up.

            “Whoa,” said Emily. Let’s take a minute to let you get your bearings.”

            “Yeah,” Terri used her hand to wipe perspiration off her forehead. Looking at her mom sitting in the chair by the gurney, the teenager noticed the relaxed look on her face. So many issues had been resolved with the miscarriage. No longer were they wrestling over what was best for Terri or what was best for the baby-to-be. Her whole family had been conflicted between the choices. It was as if God had made a discission for all of them.

            “Okay Terri, you have to be able to walk and urinate before you can go home.”

            “You mean pee?”

            “Yes, pee,” said Emily.

            “No problem.” Terri smiled at her mom. Her mom smiled back. “Where’s the bathroom?”

            “To our left over there.” Emily inclined her head in the direction.

            “Let’s go. I can do this.” Terri walked with Emily to the bathroom without a problem.

            “Isn’t it nice the way the young recover so quickly?” said Mrs. Shultz.

            “Definitely. Here is a list of limitations for Terri to follow. Dr. Baker’s phone number is at the bottom. Call his office for an appointment in the morning. Okay?”

            Mrs. Shultz accepted the paper and nodded her head in affirmation.

            “I’ll take Terri her clothes while you look over the instructions.”

            “Okay,” said Terri’s mom.

            Emily recrossed the room carrying the plastic hospital sack. She talked into the closed bathroom door. “Were you successful?”

            “Yes, and I left the evidence. I want to go home.”

            Terri opened the door for Emily who handed her the clothes and witnessed the yellowed toilet water. “Your mom has your instructions. No school for the rest of the week,” said Emily.

            “Great.”

            “Get dressed and come on out.”

            “Great,” repeated Terri.

            In moments, Terri came bouncing out of the bathroom dressed and ready to go.

            “I can’t see any reason to keep you two any longer. There isn’t a wheelchair on our unit, so you get to walk out. Dr. Baker didn’t think you needed to be admitted to a hospital room. He said to dismiss you straight from the recovery room.” Emily didn’t add that no one had been dismissed directly from the recovery room since the man walked out against medical advice after having the coke bottle removed from his rectum. Emily didn’t think Mrs. Shultz would want that information. She figured Terri probably would have thought it was funny, but Mrs. Shultz didn’t seem the type. 

            “Are you sure you are doing well enough, sweetheart.” Terri smiled to her mom. “Then that’s okay with me,” said Mrs. Shultz.

            With Terri leading the way at a fast pace, they were soon in the car on their way home and happy.





 

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 12/22/2007
An interesting chapter, Liz. I'm not sure how she can be so happy after losing her baby. My sis lost one at a very young age. Even though it 'may have been for the best', she was still extremely distraught. Everyone is different, I guess. Good work~
Sheila
Reviewed by Mary Coe 8/30/2007
This was very good reading. I have to go back to the other chapters to catch up on the reading, seems as if I started with the last chapter.
Reviewed by Jean Pike 8/23/2007
Yes, this is a nice change of pace, Elizabeth. Much more upbeat than some of the previous chapters. Gives readers a bit of a chance to catch their breath. Can't wait for the next installment of my favorite hospital story!
Jean
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/23/2007
Great story, Elizabeth; very well done! Look forward to more! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Won't be writing for a little while; membership ran out, but I CAN review and message people! Will be back soon; that's a promise! :)
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/23/2007
This story is far from over, I have a feeling...yes, so many issues may have been resolved that this girl has miscarried, but so many more long-term issues will pop up, mental issues I am thinking...hope Terri can handle it all...the coke bottle in the rectum lightens this up a bit with long-neck soda humor! It takes humorous elements to balance out a story. Well-written, Elizabeth...

Sage

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