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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
2/5/2008 |
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I would love to have seen his face, probably as red as the bra!
What a great story to bring up time and time again at family gatherings.
We have 4 daughters and one son (the caboose). One Christmas, he opened one of his presents and got a big shock--his frazzled Mom had somehow given him a gift intended for one of the girls--a new bra!
Love,
Connie
p.s. I don't read the stories very often. I picked a good one! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/6/2008 |
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LOL! I like your aunt's sense of humor too, Joyce! A fun story to read:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/19/2007 |
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| Joyce, you paint a wonderful picture of your aunt sitting on the porch drinking her coffee and smoking her cigarette. I imagine the young salesman will never forget that event--nor will he close his case without looking next time. Cute story and well told. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
6/12/2007 |
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| There is such a Mark Twain style to this short story. Quite funny! I really enjoy your writing. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/30/2007 |
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| lol. This is hysterical. I love it. Boy, would he have been just as surprised as his wife would have been mad. Your Aunt is something else. excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
5/6/2007 |
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hahaha, a wonderful story!
Love, B&R |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
4/2/2007 |
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Omg, what a hoot! Thanks so much for stopping by my den... sure am glad I stopped by yours!
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Crissy Foster |
3/31/2007 |
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| HA HA omg that's hillarious! Can you imagine what his wife would have thought. I would never have believed that story if I was his wife. Although he is wearing a suit and selling probably a very expensive item so he might make a pretty penny so, I am not sure she would care that much lol |
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| Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar |
3/10/2007 |
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Very funny!
Poor guy - can you imagine his face if he had tried to explain that to his wife?? Your Aunt is a real treasure - and a marriage saver, ;o)
Terry
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
2/26/2007 |
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"The Salesman"
Well written and entertaining.
Enjoyed the narrative and the imageries presented here.
Thank you for sharing this true and yet humorous story,
From the Heart of an Artist...
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| Reviewed by Joyce McDonald Hoskins |
2/12/2007 |
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What a great story. Family stories are wonderful. I could picture it happening. Good writing.
The other Joyce. |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
2/6/2007 |
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| Delightful story! Thanks for providing my smile for the day. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/7/2007 |
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This is great, Joyce! Thank you for sharing this "slice of life." Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
1/7/2007 |
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| enjoyed the read |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/6/2007 |
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| I loved the story Joyce. I don't think his wife would have believed him .. Something similar happened to me when I was about 24, only it involved my missing underware...M |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
1/4/2007 |
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Those poor salesmen can really catch it
sometimes?
Delightful story.
Thanks for stopping my way.
Have a great 2007. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
12/17/2006 |
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Hahaha!!!!! This was tooooo funny!!!!! What an entertaining story this is. Thank you Joyce!!!!!!
Wishing you a Wonderful Christmas and the Merriest Happy New Year!!!!!
Lots of love,
Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
10/5/2006 |
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Great down-home humor in a delightful story! So glad I checked in, Joyce!
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/5/2006 |
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Too funny; thanks for the grins, Joyce! LOL Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Constance Gotsch |
10/5/2006 |
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| ROF. That one made my day! |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
10/4/2006 |
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Thank you for the smiles my friend I enjoyed
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Aleja Bennett |
10/4/2006 |
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| This was cute and funny my friend. I was just waiting for the brief case to open. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/4/2006 |
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I am doubled over in painful fits of spasmodic laughter.
Poor woman - snatched it right off her and the doggone briefcase gobbled it. Considering the size of the bloody thing you would imagine a small earthquake ensued when those mountains were unleashed.
What a bloody hoot!
Thanks Joyce ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
10/4/2006 |
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That is hysterical, Joyce! All the more so because it's true!! Thank you for the belly-laugh today, dear friend.
This was very well done!
Love,
CJ |
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