Reader Reviews for "Forcing the Door"

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Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione	4/6/2004
I have to go with C. Lee McKenzie on this one when I say this, you got a strong write here. You should make this one at least about three pages longer. Expand the paragraphs, it is very descriptive but you need to make them a little longer. It is a very human story, and that is the kind I seem to relate to in the sense of the way it is written. Very relatable characters with this one.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch	9/9/2002
Well I loved this coming from a family of firefighters maybe why? But I think it was your excellent writing abilities that brought this home to me;)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead	7/9/2002
good read....... ;0)
Reviewed by C. Lee McKenzie	3/20/2002
Well, I like it. It's a piece of the bigger story--a slice out of a day on duty. Have you considered putting it into a larger context? Say a novella with a diary entry format. It is most assuredly true that when you write about what you know or love, the writing is strong.
Reviewed by Victoria Murray	12/30/2001
Another compelling short story. Maybe you should consider writing a book! Victoria