Two ardent souls continue melding within the breadth of their impassioned destiny...
This poetic story of intimate romance
consists of 3 confectioning interludes-This is Confection Two
Within these intimate poetic confections
of collaborative creativities
It is my privilege to further work with a wonderful poet
Jack Killian…and we offer you now
Ocean Front
Confections Two
Intimes Les Desserts (intimate desserts)
Please Note: Ocean Front Confection One: Les Aveux d'Intimité (confessions of intimacy):
Vickie, this conjoined effort is an exercise expressed with a degree of pleasure for the writers and their readers -- erotic and revealing two who created a rendering with a great deal of finesse --a very fine effort by both of you - peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
The most erotic, sensual poem I read, first time, in my life. Wow, it is hot and stunningly beatuful. I am speachless, all I can say I wish I was there... :)
Thanks for sharing,
Love, Ankin
WOW!
I'm kinda speechless Victoria.
This is as real as it gets. It actually
gave me a surge of hope for the dismal world of poetry!
I read both of the confections three times, and each time the layers and nuances of interplay blossomed a little bit more. The characters seem uncannily real as the feelings and expressions develop and envelope the reader.
And I love how your friend set the scene.
I could visualize every stroke of the brush like it was a movie.
I'll have to admit, in all honesty, that it's, by far, the best romantic scene that I've ever read anywhere. This may well be your masterwork!
Brava!
Blessings ...
My Dear Victoria, I will be spending alot of time in the shower,w/ice cold water. Your expressions w/Jack gives
one hope that romance is alive and kicking between all
that believe in 'love,'lust,and relationships.
"Ocean Front" is your top runner in your erotica... Most Excellent!!
Nothing in the world can man do better to give pleasure as when he knows how to eat "the" butterfly.
Probably one of the most erotic and tender poems from the author, as the reader wished it didn't came to an end.