This story I recommend for those who read Asimov, really imaginative story. I am a sucker for a good Science Fiction story and as I said in your other reviews. Your strength in your talent is being a writer that is quite well rounded. The other writer I can say this of is Steven Shrewsbury. You two should get together and cowrite a story together.
It took me a while to navagate the site itself but when I found the story it was well worth the wait. It shows you were at this for quite some time, and have the talents to take the Sci-Fi genre to places that no other writer can really match. I highly recommend this story for those who are looking for smart Science Fiction. I hope the agents are reading this review because they definately don't even know what they are missing here.