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Pity the Poor Guy!!!
By Linda Settles
Last edited: Saturday, July 11, 2009
Posted: Saturday, July 11, 2009
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.

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I am here at ICRS (starts for me on Sunday with a meeting for a foreign rights contract) What an interesting morning...

I went for a long walk in downtown Denver this morning at about 6:30 am.  I was so excited that sleeping in was not an option for me.  My dearly beloved husband, though excited as well, had no problem pulling the sheets back over his head.

After an hour of enjoying the mild breeze and morning splendor among towering buildings and carefully designed green oasis,' I stopped in at McDonald's to purchase a cup of coffee for my comatose husband.  I was ready to get moving!

As I walked in the door, still smiling from the refreshment of my morning walk, a man about my age looked up and said, "Can I buy you a cup of coffee?" 

I glanced from him to his open laptop and back before repying with a question of my own, "Why would you ask me that?  Do you think you know me?"

"No," he said. "But I want to."

Without losing my smile, I said.  "Didn't you see my wedding ring?"

"Yes," he grinned.  "But you don't have to tell everything."

"Why would I want to do something I wouldn't tell the man I love with all my heart?" I said.

"Well, I can always try," Another big grin.

"Let me ask you something," I said, still smiling.  "Do you know the God of the Bible?" (this is not my normal response to an invitation to adultry)

"Yes," he answered.  "Sure I do."

"Well what do you think He thinks about what you are doing?"

"i don't know..."

"I don't think you are living up to His expectation," I said.  "Think about it."

I walked away, aware that his eyes followed me to the counter.  I purchased my husband's coffee, extra sugar please, and turned to leave the same way I had come in.

My "friend" looked up, sill grinning, and I said (still smiling), "I hope you think about what I said."  His grin widened. 

"You will meet your Maker some day my friend," I said, "and it won't be that long."

For the first time the grin flickered and almost went out. I could see the gentleman (did you catch the irony?) wondering if I was going to kill him myself or send my enraged husband down to do it.

Still smiling, I backed through the door and waved at him with my husband's hot steaming cup of coffee. 

I returned to the hotel and entertained my waking husband iwth a chronicle of my morning's activities, concluding with, "I hope this doesn't make you worry about me walking downtown."

His only response, "I'm not worried about you, I just feel sorry for the poor guy."

 

 


 

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Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 7/13/2009
Stir them coals, gal! Great story, I hope the rest of the trip was worth the stay.
Reviewed by Susan Smith 7/13/2009
This guy is creepy! You handled it very well. And you gave him something to tbhink about. As a fellow authorsden writer, Karen, always says - Be safe!
Susan
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/12/2009
Excellent story, Linda; nice to see you back here where you belong! Welcome back!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 7/12/2009
Was he wearing a ring? I've met a few like this one and they make my skin crawl. Good for you in responding the way you did. He is a fool but might not remain so for too long, or not. Glad you are back. Hugs, J'nia



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