edited: Wednesday, January 28, 2009
By Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel
Rated "G" by the Author.
Posted: Wednesday, June 13, 2007
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Dear Lucille, I read this simple, yet eloquent, poem from beginning to end without stumbling over one error. There was no shifting point of view, irrational jumps in time or mind-boggling, mid-stream change in subject matter. The poem's readability means that maybe, just maybe, you might be able to touch someone's heart with it. Publish! Roberta