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| Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler |
3/21/2011 |
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Reminds me of when I worked delivering newspapers from 2 to 6 in the morning. Some captivating descriptions you've written here.
Tom |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
11/30/2010 |
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Reminded me the the feeling I had once when walking through the sleepy streets of my hometown, which inspired me to write "Norwood Night".
You have done an absolutely superb job of capturing this shift!
Very much enjoyed!!
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| Reviewed by eliza keating |
8/25/2010 |
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| i know this feeling so well...as a nurse in a mental health ward we all most take our turn of the dreaded nightshift..and it seems to come around to quickly ..an excellent piece of writing ...eliza keating |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
12/16/2009 |
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| Excellent writing, Erin |
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| Reviewed by J. P. Lowe |
10/17/2007 |
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You've vividly and skillfully captured the life of a nightshift worker. I was one myself for many years and reading your fine poem brought back many memories for me.
Great work! |
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
2/27/2007 |
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Hi friend, Erin,
This poem brought back memories of the quiet lonely moments during the slow perods, when I used to work in a wharehouse and the other times when later in life, I was a night watchman (Security Guard). I always wondered if any body cared that we worked nights as they were getting into their beds. Good writing! Please feel free to check out my site at freewebs.com/kendoo or at yahoo 360 meettheauthors group. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/25/2006 |
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| really nice write-you really created the atmosphere! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
1/20/2006 |
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Been there, seen that, done that !
It ain't no fun being on night shift, especially if you have a wife and family
A subject that gets easily passed over with indifference !
Well crafted
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
10/16/2005 |
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"...Flocks of birds and leaves are replaced by nothing…only cold.
Soul-chilling, bone-hurting, eye stinging cold..."
You really set the mood with this work. Brava! |
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| Reviewed by Marjorie Coogle (Reader) |
10/16/2005 |
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We forget that while we sleep others are on the job keeping things on the go. This is a great reminder.
Marjorie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/16/2005 |
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This is sad, but that is life. Many works night shifts of one kind or another.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a Sandie Angel :o) |
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