Hotel Del Coronado
by Karen Kelsay
Friday, March 06, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Hotel Del Coronado
She unwraps the newspaper
and lifts it from the box,
palm trees and red rooftops promenade
across her beloved watercolor.
Back in her early twenties,
she caught the bus to meet sailors
in that ball room, and danced
all night to big band music.
Pictures of royalty and movie stars
lined the hallways, behind
brilliant frames. Chandeliers
hung in the lobby.
There, she sunbathed on the Silver Stand
while naval ships passed by.
Now, sea scents fill her mind,
as eighty-year old fingers trace
the glass.
Staring at the ragged palm
outside her desert home,
she squints her eyes--and pretends
she’s in San Diego.
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
3/9/2009 |
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Hi Karen, This is a beautiful write! It could be about the ghost that still haunts that place.... thank you for sharing....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
3/9/2009 |
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A great poem,welcome to the den.I hope I can see more of your poetry in the future :-),take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
3/8/2009 |
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| I like! I like! Welcome to AD! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/7/2009 |
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Karen,
There's a delicate, warm and firm touch in this poem, memories presented with feeling, and it has a yearning, too. Fine work.
John |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
3/7/2009 |
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| Enjoyed ..very well done ..take care....Hugsss |
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