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Blur
by William S. Cottringer
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Slow Don't the merry-Go-Round so i can catch up with the blur please.

BLUR

Slow Down

Merry-Go-Round,

Can’t catch the blur,

Lost in overload,

Way too dizzy;

Want to thrive,

But can’t survive;

Looking for simple,

Drowning in chaos.

What were they thinking?

Right click, left click,

Double click, delete;

Brain about to explode.

Breath out angst;

What was imagined

Can be un-imagined.

The Prosperity Zone

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Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley	8/7/2008

Good Morning William I enjoyed you emotional poem, I was unable to visit your link "The Prosperity Zone" Embraced ~ Embrassé Vickie




Reviewed by Lois Christensen	5/26/2008

Need to slow down , we all do at times. Our minds and bodies just want to dart hither and thither and not give us much rest.




Reviewed by Barbara Smith	5/15/2008

William, life is full of living in the fastlane and sometimes we have to stop & take control of the hour or we'll burst.




Reviewed by Dawn Wilson	5/13/2008

This is excellent and describes well the fast track that so many tend to be on.




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	5/13/2008

Sounds like you need a little quality time at a very slow pace, well versed.... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Michelle Mead	5/13/2008

That ending is very cool. We all need to get off the merry-go-round.

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