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Leaves
by Daniel L Keith

Saturday, October 09, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Leaves

It's fall outside with a cool fresh breeze,
Leaves are falling from the trees.

Rake the leaves into a pile,
The children are watching with a cute little smile.

Catch the glimmer in the childrens eyes,
They know they're cute, they think they're sly.

They watch as I rake, pile one, pile two,
I know exactly what they're going to do.

As I turn my head they run and jump,
Jump in the piles and mess them up.

I hand them the rake and watch for awhile,
It's my turn now as I give them a smile.

Pile one, pile two, pile number three,
Come on kids jump with me.

We sat there laughing, having such fun,
Now it's time we get the job done.

The raking is finished, we had fun today,
This moment we had, forever will stay.

                                                                Daniel L Keith 

 

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Reviewed by Clarence Prince 7/18/2011
"Now it's time we get the job done." And a great finished to a lovely poem, Daniel! "This moment we had, forever will stay." Blessings!!!

Reviewed by David Keith (Reader) 1/24/2011
That's really good and my wife agrees--we like the poem about the leaves. lol. No, really good poem Daniel.

David Keith...
Reviewed by Z McClure 12/8/2010
I just had my soul tickled! The story is so fresh and the cadence so playful that you make me feel as though I was one of those children jumping into leaf pile. Wonderful, wonderful write, brother Daniel!
May God bless you real good today.

~Zach
Reviewed by sarah kuroczynski (Reader) 11/22/2010
I have a big happy smile on my face after having read this poem. Life can be so easy and wonderful, and these moments (the pile of leaves and the smile on the faces) make our lifes special. I wish you many more of moments alike! with hugs, sarah
Reviewed by Susan Smith 11/2/2010
You capture the joy of the young in the season of fall, who find play in work.
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/19/2010
EVEN IN THE MIDST OF ACCOMPLISHING A NECESSARY TASK...THERE IS JOY AND 'KODAK MOMENTS' THAT YOU WILL NEVER FORGET. A HAPPY, WONDERFUL WORK...SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/17/2010
A delightful, apt, and timely write, Daniel. Thank you for sharing this lovely experience. Love and blessings to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/11/2010
Very sweet write, Daniel....the imagery was adorable! Been there..done that! Loved it!

Blessings,
Anna
Reviewed by Barbara Henry 10/11/2010
Beautiful Daniel!
It's a good idea to have fun raking the leaves since there are so many and multiple times they need to be raked.
This one made me laugh.
Continued success~
Barbara Henry
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/11/2010
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/9/2010
Sublime! Memories to treasure for all ~
Best Wishes,
Christine



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