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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/19/2006 |
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| Well written. I can feel the pain and strength . I can see what you write.!!!!!M |
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
8/28/2006 |
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| A tribute to the power of prayer! |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
6/21/2006 |
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I agree with Susan and Linda. They said it better than I could, or at least before I could (giggle).
May the Lord Jesus beless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be." |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/16/2006 |
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| good imagery and form ... |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/11/2006 |
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Oh beautiful expression of one completing another, balancing his weakness with her strength! This is love. Thank you, Rose...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
6/11/2006 |
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| good one |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/11/2006 |
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| Agree with Susan on this great write. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
6/11/2006 |
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fantastic write...an epic feel about it!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/11/2006 |
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Exceptional poetry! Thank you for sharing Mary!
eT |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
6/11/2006 |
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| enjoyed this very much Mary... |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/11/2006 |
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A sobering realization of ones responsibilities when we are given eyes to see anothers weaknesses.
The last two lines of the first stanza set a beautifully generous tone for the rest of the construct. This was deeply felt in the penning of it!
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
6/11/2006 |
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| The imagery here is outstanding, allowing your reader to not only see but feel her hope & love, she waits...prays for his safe return, standing alone with her faith sustaining them in the midst of adversity. Powerful stuff, a pleasure to read! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/11/2006 |
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A tale such as the old ones used to write of the bravery. loyalty and love of the women who waited and kept the home fires burning.
FEe |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/11/2006 |
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A heroic tale of patience.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
6/11/2006 |
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Nice penmenship...
Xxxx dove |
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