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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/4/2009 |
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I can surely relate to this well written poem. I was wondering where you were going with the betrayal theme. You said it well Bobbi, we all know how this feels.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
4/3/2009 |
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Great poem,very well written,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/2/2009 |
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So true, and I think God compensates for that betrayal by giving us our grandchildren to keep us young in our hearts at least.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
4/2/2009 |
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| yes they do Bobbi, feeln you on this, cute little grand. cheers |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/2/2009 |
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Powerful write, Bobbi, and your great granddaughter is a cutie pie! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
4/2/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
4/2/2009 |
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| Well done Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/1/2009 |
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Truth, spoken in powerfully moving lines, Bobbi - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
4/1/2009 |
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Love Born Of Betrayal Is Better Lost Than Lived...
c 1979/2009 TRASK...
Sad....
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
4/1/2009 |
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| Some bodies betray us faster than others do. It's all in how we respect them growing up. Personally my bodies about ready to put a hurting on me LOL. Enjoyed the pen. |
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