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| Reviewed by Anthony Nerone |
11/21/2009 |
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Nothing is forbidden when it is love. Excellent write!
GOD Bless
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
9/11/2009 |
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It's the mystery that makes it all so much more exciting.
Powerfully exclaimed.
:) Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/10/2009 |
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Love is a powerful phenomenon ,Indeed, that we all want to recieve and enjoy. Wonderful poem.
Hugs
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| Reviewed by Vasu Ramanujam |
4/15/2009 |
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Karen,
How ironic that we believe we want to live for today, but when today stares at us in the face, some things are "forbidden"! Your words capture this very powerfully.
Vasu |
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| Reviewed by Anna Glymph |
2/23/2009 |
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| The secret admiration of love. I am wondering does shyness come along with this awesome write or maybe a crush? |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
12/19/2008 |
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Karen,
I too have this kind of love for someone that is really "forbidden love", It is beautiful and deadly at the same time. You are absolutely right, one must live in the present, tomorrow may never come. Wonderful poem and very heartfelt in so many ways.
Happy holidays,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry |
10/7/2008 |
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i don't see the forbidden in this, but it does speak to way we loose ourselves to the power of love and in that our leap of faith brings so many emotions
very nice, ~D |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
7/18/2008 |
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| Splendid |
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| Reviewed by dennis stanfield |
6/10/2008 |
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When I read that, thoughts from past relationships came to mind. That poem pulled feelings outta me.. Great one!
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| Reviewed by Sir Leonardo |
3/1/2008 |
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| nicely done |
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| Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei |
2/4/2008 |
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Very evocative; I enjoyed this very much.
Mahalo, Kalikiano |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/10/2007 |
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| When you share how love has affected you, you open your heart for the world to see the great love you have for this person. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/29/2007 |
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| Beautiful poem!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Everett DeValle |
9/17/2007 |
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| Awesome write and I loved the message in the end. You always have to take that chance or it may never come again. Beautiful read. ~Ev |
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| Reviewed by Chase Von |
9/12/2007 |
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| Beautiful and very true, all we have is the present. If we don't act in it, it cannot be retrieved from the past... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
8/31/2007 |
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| Beautiful. Liz |
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| Reviewed by C. Nichols |
7/27/2007 |
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| It is never too late to express this, your poem sounds like you are reminding yourself to live for today- and so you should- and put your cards on the table with your love... |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
6/26/2007 |
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| Very Romantic. Enjoyed reading. |
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| Reviewed by Desiree Parson (Reader) |
5/31/2007 |
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| Your poem encompasses every emotion that I feel for the new man in my life. Beautifully written. |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
5/29/2007 |
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| Blissfully romantic! Beautifully worded and expressed! A joyful read! HUGS! SC |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
5/16/2007 |
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When the right connection is made with the heart, the world stands still. It's magical, almost holy.
Your closing line is empowering, Karen: "...we have to live for today because tomorrow may never come."
There is only one "best" time for anything. That time is now!
A stirring poem filled with insight, emotion and sage advice.
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
5/2/2007 |
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| What I feel inside scares me to death. {I GUESS THIS LINE IS A CULMINATION OF LIVING ON THIS PLANET} The rest is endless in beauty - |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/15/2007 |
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This is an Oldie but a goody!
I'm so glad I didn't miss this sweet gem!
Karen~ I love this poem
YOur heart is Open and real
I feel romance unconditionally throughout it!
These same feelings I have been BLESSED with and Thank God
Everyday!
Seize the moment and enjoy it's lasting pleasures and memories!
You say it all well here!
Always! Listen to your heart!
WArmly, Warrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox |
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| Reviewed by Zahala San Simone |
3/25/2007 |
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Live for today--an oh-so-true mantra. Lovely piece.
Wendi |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/21/2007 |
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| enjoyed the read |
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| Reviewed by J M |
3/18/2007 |
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Love that is sacred is love eternal and this is very beautiful poetry so well expressed with confessionals.....
Peace,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/14/2007 |
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| A beautiful heart felt poem of love and desire...M |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
3/8/2007 |
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That truly is love...
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| Reviewed by Karen Michelle Nutt |
2/26/2007 |
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| What a beautiful poem that touches the heart and soul. |
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| Reviewed by Sharon Jordan |
2/13/2007 |
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| A beautiful declaration of love. |
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| Reviewed by Raechel Blakeney |
2/4/2007 |
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| This poem describes completely how I feel for my fiance. It's beautiful and inspiring. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
2/1/2007 |
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This is a very beautiful poem full of life. Every moment seems tied to
experiencing the here and now. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
1/29/2007 |
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This is a very good poem, but then wonder how did I miss it. Is THIS forbiddenness the root of all the legitimate? I liked the perspective, the motif, the flow...
A very good job!
D |
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| Reviewed by Accoustic Blanket |
1/26/2007 |
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A loving woman who offers a man the world and also to spin it, is a gem, worth her weight in gold, infinitely more.
Not only a moving write, but a sounding heart beat. |
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
1/16/2007 |
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| that is how i feel about my special, wonderful person in my life. very nicely said. rb. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
12/22/2006 |
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A nice view of this thought through poetry and the forbidden love ...nicely expressed...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
12/10/2006 |
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To truly love someone is grand,but when your love is returned
it is magical forever.Loved your write.
Michael |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
11/29/2006 |
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This is so romantic, Karen. Your love and feelings shine, shine, shine.
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Marguerite Little Flower |
11/2/2006 |
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| Yes, forbidden love is tough but the absence of it can make it all the sweeter Marguerite |
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| Reviewed by Stanley Asia E |
6/21/2006 |
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The narrator covered the real feeling of true love,
rather than being carried away by strong emotion
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| Reviewed by Amy Ramdass |
4/13/2006 |
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You have captured the whole
meaning of it all...the real
meaning and Forbidden Love makes
it all the more sweeter...
Love it!
Amy Ramdass
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| Reviewed by Melody Ravert |
3/18/2006 |
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Hi Karen,
I love the passion that shines through this poem. Would you be interested in having an excerpt of it in a work of fiction? I'd be more than happy to acknowledge you as the author of the poem and list your website in the book. Let me know, please.
Either way, it is a fabulous piece of poetry and I wish you the very best!
Melody
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
1/28/2006 |
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| An excellent expression of the complexity of loving someone. It's rough, but even in the mere loving itself is an inherent and proud beauty. Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Aleja Bennett |
12/15/2005 |
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| Isn't love so scary my riend and you have expressed such feelings and emotions in this piece. When we give our heart it is in the hands of the person that we think at the time deserves it but they sometimes don't. This is why I felt the fear in this piece. Excellent real expressions rom the heart that I always admire in a writer. |
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| Reviewed by Suzy Karnow (Reader) |
11/20/2005 |
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Ohh...I know these feelings too well....
Thank you for sharing! |
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| Reviewed by James Musler |
11/17/2005 |
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The one venue of writing I never dared to explore (and for good reason) - poetry. I can't write good poetry but I can enjoy good poetry, more to the point I can FEEL good poetry. This poetry feels great (Do I sound a little too much like a certain cereal eating tiger?). Exceptional write!
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
11/3/2005 |
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Yes Karen, Exceptional truth expressed brilliantly!
love it!
peace and joy',
Rich Criso |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
10/27/2005 |
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| So heart-touching so soul-soothing. Excellent poem |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
10/22/2005 |
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You are SO right, Karen Seize the moment! Sweet and romantic
and deeply-felt. LOVE LIVE ON!! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/20/2005 |
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Love and affection flow through the lines of "Forbidden Love".
Very touching expression of romance and devotion.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Forbidden Love".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
10/17/2005 |
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| Thanks! And this is true, all we have is the moments and hope for another day of life and love. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/14/2005 |
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| moving sentiments ... excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack |
10/4/2005 |
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| I should be so lucky. By the way, I love New York. |
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| Reviewed by Helen Downey |
3/13/2005 |
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| A great write here! I can feel the emotion within this piece. |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
2/5/2005 |
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| I have a feeling that your tomorrow is here to stay...love Marco |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/11/2004 |
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| I love the "live for today" attitude. Nice write. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/16/2004 |
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| A lovely, sweet creation, Karen. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Shirley Cheng |
8/9/2004 |
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| This is beautiful, so sweet and tender! |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
8/5/2004 |
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| great poem. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
8/5/2004 |
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| If this is based on real events, I hope the loved one listens. :-) |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
8/4/2004 |
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Dear Karen,
What tender magical emotions you
convey. So beautifully expressed
and so sincere. Very touching
write, enjoyed it thoroughly :)
Warm hugs
Elga |
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| Reviewed by Elaine Warely |
8/4/2004 |
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| This has a very tender feel to it. |
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