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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
8/30/2009 |
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Hello Karen, I love this one too. Flows with happiness. "The Fool" got my attention, because i have another version of it in my little poetry book "Fountain of Trevi - Love Poems".
Tomorrow I will try to post it online. Tell me your opinion if you have time. Mine is a sad version of the Fool, called "Fool of Me"
Best wishes, Ankin |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/2/2008 |
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| Foolishness, not when you love it isn't making a fool of yourself. This is from your heart though so we take it as it stands. Wonderful write and wonderful picture on top of it. Sound amazingly to be going strong, your loves. |
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| Reviewed by Chris Wright |
1/24/2008 |
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| Great Piece and you definitely got me wanting to act a fool! The only sad thing is that we often miss love because we are too scared to be foolish and take that risk at bonding with someone. I think your piece beautiful paints the reality of all the great things that can happen between two people if they are clumsy enough to just live and trip in love. Keep Flowing Sista & Have a Crunk Day! |
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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
6/6/2007 |
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| "The Fool's," who can only fuel one another with a fire and sensational drive for one another. There are fools out there, feeling the opposite. Only wishing for such a relationship. This poem shines with fire. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/27/2007 |
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Blessed are the ones that can sing their love.
I have enjoyed the reading of this glowing poem, "The Fool".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
5/24/2007 |
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Being a FOOL is Awesome!
Enjoy it Karen!
I love this beautiful gem!
Full of inspiration!
Always go with the UNEXPECTED!
Helps your relationship to KEEP GrOwing!
Many should know this love story!
Warmly, Warrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
Stay SAFE!
Stay POsitive!
P.s. I am glad you ACT upon your feelings, and not let them drift
awayyyyyyyyy~ : ) |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/22/2007 |
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You are fortunate indeed to know such a relationship, Karen. I'd by lying if I said I am not more than a bit envious. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Constance Gotsch |
5/22/2007 |
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| At least nobody's playing the fool. nice job |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/21/2007 |
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| ah yes...but where would the fun be without being a bit foolish from time to time...splendid, passionate write my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
5/21/2007 |
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A beautiful love story my friend, this would make a wonderful love song! An inspiration for couples everywhere...being open and honest and talking is one of the keys of survival in a relationship! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/21/2007 |
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A beautiful love story.
Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
5/21/2007 |
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| Wonderful romantic write. Time brings reinsurance for relationships. Talk is so important in the beginning. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/21/2007 |
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This is an excellant write Karen that speaks openly and honestly of true feelings in the matter of your love for another and the love that he reciprocates with. Well done.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
5/21/2007 |
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| Let's hear it for Fools~!! R o m a n c e~!! World would be dull indeed without us, would it not. Thanks for the clever reminder!! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack |
5/21/2007 |
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Karen,
I can tell you really love this guy. Very powerful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/21/2007 |
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Good at heart is called fool by those that don't have at all a heart.
Better be the fool than the one thriving on them.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/21/2007 |
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Karen,
At times we all plan the role but it's the spontaneity that keeps it alive. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
5/21/2007 |
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I thought you called me donkey boy, guess that makes me an ass too...
Ahhh romance, you're dressed to kill, he has what looks like the gun..
There's something you might just need to understand..lol |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/20/2007 |
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Happiness and satisfaction abounds in this poetry. How wonderfully expressed! Enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/20/2007 |
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| Ah! have so been there--amazing how we can so happily be the fool-well done with insight and honesty, i am impressed by that ability-- |
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| Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader) |
5/20/2007 |
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| He was before my Time, But Frankie Lymon sang an old Song "Shy do fools fall in love?" Reminds me of that.. GOod one Karen. Pen on.. "Donny" |
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