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You hurt me
Deep within my soul
Lies, pain, fear and joy
Things I don't even know
What you see is normal
What I feel is hidden
But when you force my hand
It is then I know I can
Reach deep down and grab
That which makes it clear
The pain you elicit is numb
A way for you to see me tears,
my fears
The many times your touch reached my heart like a gun
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| Reviewed by Gisele Vincent-Page |
11/4/2011 |
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| Patricia, what a powerful line: The many times your touch reached my heart like a gun. You create a wonderful contrast by using gentle words to describe your pain created by an abuser. Good writing. peace Gisele |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/7/2009 |
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I love reading your poetry.You don't hold anything back and you let your feelings come out in your poems.Take care,keep up the great work
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Tabitha Carter |
4/27/2009 |
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| It shot dead on, blazing the emotional devastation of heartache. |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello |
4/27/2009 |
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Tragic lines of pain and torment. Very moving poem.
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
4/27/2009 |
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| So full of pain...effectively written. |
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