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  Neptune's Trident
by Patrick A Granfors
Monday, January 30, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.

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It's a bad idea to make Neptune angry.


I went down to the summer seashore

Expecting dune and wave

With foam and whispers quietly

Fond memories to save

 

The shore and waters were frozen

Despite the summer’s heat

Into twisted shards of Neptune’s tears

His trident at his feet

 

I cried to him “Where are the waves?”

But he just hung his head

In pure despair with darkened eyes

And this is what he said.

 

“I gave you pristine beauty

Blue oceans for your use

And as I look around me now

Can only weep for your abuse”

 

“A solemn gift so roundly soiled

Its creatures gone for good

My generosity squandered

I will do now what I should”

 

In anger he threw his trident

Deep into the sky

Piercing clouds that blackened

That soon began to cry

 

Frozen tears began to fall

Flakes of Neptune’s rage

“I’ll come back in a thousand years

To turn this foul story’s page”

 

As he faded into the distance

The ice began to rise

As the fiery trail of his trident

Signaled mans’ demise

 

I awakened to the TV’s drone

Mythology was the show

But looking out to see the summer’s bloom

The ground was covered deep in snow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2012 Patrick Granfors

 

 




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Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 3/6/2012
Yeah...we've dumped too much junk in the ocean. Neptune has a right to be angray.

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Tom Hyland 2/1/2012
CUZ PAT ... ANOTHER 'WELL DONE' ...
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 1/31/2012
Pristine and beauty before us. Neptune's warnings can
bring his rath upon us. Fantastic poem Patrick.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/31/2012
That was some dream. For telling your awakening because it showed the sea as frozen just like your surroundings in winter and not the summer paradise you are wishing for. Your dreams have fervent imagination.

Ron
Reviewed by Richard King 1/31/2012
Sad, scary, prophetic,,,,,, sounds like a bad dream that could become a best seller.

Nicely done, Sir Patrick.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 1/31/2012
It only stands to reason that one day the abuse is going to catch up with us.....great writing, Patrick! It's so sad what's happening to our beautiful planet!

Anna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/31/2012
“I gave you pristine beauty
Blue oceans for your use
And as I look around me now
Can only weep for your abuse”

Old Neptune's not the only one weeping these extremely sad days,
We're decimating Earth's land, sea, and skies in many horrid ways.

Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/31/2012
Truly enjoyed this, Patrick. Beautifully done, my friend.
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 1/30/2012
THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST WONDERFUL, PATRICK...THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR 'DREAM' THAT REMINDS ONE OF THE GOOD BOOK'S 'REALITY'. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE + HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 1/30/2012
Too much truth in the rendering of your
lyrics *Patrick* and worthy of the sadness!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/30/2012
To the Pacific ocean, old Neptune should do his worse,
As it is the people of California that treat it with their purse,
Thinking that if they spend enough money,
Their future will be then quite sunny,
But those of us on the east coast,
Only find this idea quite funny...e
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 1/30/2012
Pretty deep, fearsome message here, Patrick. Good poem.
Mark
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 1/30/2012
But what about global warming, Patrick? Heehee Nice work on this piece, man.
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