Not Just Any Old Banana
by P. A Zimmerman
Saturday, May 07, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A silly Limerick |
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A hungry monkey from Havana,
Longed for a ripe banana.
The one he liked best,
Was shipped from the rest
So he hopped a flight to Savannah.
He rushed off the plane,
And got caught in the rain
Which gave him the urge to pee.
He searched and he searched,
But not all in vain,
Until he found the right tree.
While doing his business,
He gazed up high,
And the ripest banana
Caught his eye.
So he climbed and climbed,
'Til he reached the bunch
That held the one that would
Become his lunch.
The very best banana,
in Savannah!
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
5/20/2011 |
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| I like limericks and it never occurred to me that they could be strung together to tell a story. Fun too! Patrick |
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| Reviewed by ulrike ritchie (Reader) |
5/17/2011 |
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by ulrike ritchie (reader) at 5/13/2011 12:06:52 PM
Patricia.....a monkey who found his favorite banana only because your words, cleverly strung together, sent him on his merry way to Savannah and also brought a big smile to my face.
Thank you!
U.R.
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
5/8/2011 |
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| Enjoyed this up lifting pen of yours. TY for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Bergeron |
5/7/2011 |
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| a nice little rhyme for a rainy afternoon...well done |
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