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What the Hell You Doing Here? by Hobbs H Hobbs Tuesday, February 04, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan trust poem
At the sharp edge of my pain I find blame For life My friends And family For whom I dread not to exceed with success Wealth Love Don’t want to complain But I guess I will Just cause I am lonely And like to sound shrill Like mean little Lucy from peanuts I hate you all But want to be loved So stand next to the canyon and expect a shove And don’t blame me I am within my rights Its trust issues So please turn your back And just love me

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Reviewed by na na (Reader)	2/5/2003

Hobbs, trust is the biggest word in the English language or any other language. So hard to achieve and maintain, and misused more than anything else in the word. Very good write. Bill Murray




Reviewed by the phantom pheonix	2/5/2003

LOVED IT ExCELLENT POITN OF VIEew THAT I SHARE WITH YOU trust is so hard when everyone is bickering for atention or love excellent poem nicely done great job!!




Reviewed by Janet Caldwell	2/4/2003

Damn HHH, this is how I feel tonight, actually, I wanna, oh nevermind... (((HUGS))) to you, I hope that we both feel better, soon. JC xoxoxoxo